rate_review Reviews

I LOVE this story. It's very well written and just wonderful all around.

Beautiful... Very sweet, it seems so natural... It flows like fresh honey. Just excellent!

Very nice!

absolutely beautifull!! loved the whole thing. I must say I'm a HUGE fan of domHarry & subDraco fics. especially the way u portraied harry & draco here....wondetfull job. do u like Mpreg cause the ending sex scene could roll into something like that. that they're so in-love that their magic came together to create another being from it. what do you think?

I really liked this - it was very poignant how Harry cared enough to try all those different methods, spend any amount of money, just to make Draco happy again. It was an interesting portrayal of Draco's depression too, and I particularly enjoyed the way that Draco's muse was Harry and their love-making. I also liked the description of the desire to create something as an itch or tingle in his fingers, and the way that you wrote Draco as not believing that he is creative and yet enjoying playing the piano, which is of course a creative endeavour! ^_^

My only niggle was the couple of spelling mistakes (but then, I am a bit OCD about spelling!) but considering the fact that this was unbetaed I thought you did remarkably well in keeping the grammar and spelling mistakes to a minumum.

Altogether a really good fic with a good plot, good background story and a nice amount of smut balancing it all. Thanks for sharing it!

Lovely, angsty Draco is so cute.
I'd like to read it from a 3rd person pov though.
Nevertheless, it's darling.
Make Harry be Dracos human canvas! :D