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for You Really Got A Hold On Me

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful. You do the best Lumione oneshots!
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yum, I always like Lucius in casual clothes (less to pry him out of - heh, heh). OMG, who was Hermione
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
~*SG*~

As always, brilliant!! Great song choice and a hot read!

Glad Hermione took a chance on Lucius!!!

Love and Hugs!!!

Lady B*

xoxoxoxo
person mariteri
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story was a good one.
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT! GOOD LORD HOT!!! Well written and wonderful I LOVED IT!

Must this be a one-shot? Its got the makings of a chapter-fic... and the finality of a one-shot. you could make it either.... Please consider a chapter-fic, if not this story.. than the background and/or future to it?? Maybe??

*cookies shaped covered in frosting*

~Sophie Max-Anderson


--- Very well written, especially to have her this worked up over Het. She is a SLASH Goddess.. and you managed to get a reaction out of her with Het. I commend you.

-- Rikash Moonsword
person Byrony
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Ronald Weasley do you have a no-no place?"...LMAO
person Terrie
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well naked blond men will do that, you know. Disrupt your focus, that is. You will just have to concentrate harder or write faster in between disruptions. LOL Hot story! Thanks so much for sharing.
person lily69
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was delicious! I love Lucius. I WANT Lucius! :-)

The bit w/ Ron & Lavendar was precious!

Excellent one-shot!
person tsorg
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, hot story. I really love your Snape and Hermione stories but I adore your Lucius and Hermione stories, they are hot and sweet. No no place LOL!
person Larrabee
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello AGAIN!! I love your stories.

I just wanted to let you know the song is from 1962.