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for The Waterhole

by lordoberon

schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this! You've done an excellent job of showing their hesitancy and awareness that what they're doing is wrong but still their lust and need. It's really human and very HOT! I myself am feeling quite conflicted about it all but I can't turn away : ) I do hope you update soon and I can't wait to see where this ends up for them. I can't imagine a happy ending where they get to shag each other for the rest of their lives, but maybe they can find a way to make it work both in their heads and within the confines of the social rules they had to adhere to...great update : )
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good so far. Please continue.
person pfeil
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, oops, I read it wrong. I thought there was something wrong with Hermione, not that Hermione was noticing something wrong in Ron's letters.

Thanks for answering :P

(In fact, I'm loath to see Hermione with Ron. R/G is much better.)
person Anon
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Must...have...MORE!
person Hermyone
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good, can't wait for part two. I do love a good Ron/Ginny fic.
person pfeil
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Ron and Ginny belong together.

What's wrong with Hermione, BTW?
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love ron ginny incest, hope you write more soon