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for The Waterhole

by lordoberon

schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thank you thank you thank you, almost tought you'd given up on this one :), been checking everyday, still love it
person joey101
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
u should totally write more...ur doing a great job with the writning. PLEAZ UPDATE SOON!
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes yes! This is what I was waiting for...*the conversation*. They had to talk about what they were doing to move past it or else it would have imploded or exploded or tanked the story. Wonderful job, this feels kinda real, which is scary because it's HOT : ) Can't wait to see where you're taking their secret and yay for shagging in the kitchen and against the wall : )
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a beautiful story. I love the way you balance eroticism with romance. I'm normally a Ron and Hermione shipper but this story makes me a Ron and Ginny shipper too. The two of them together feels just so right.
person joey101
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you HAVE to update soon! this is such a good story and it would be a waste if u left it like this. pleaz update ASAP!
person Mellow03
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, for next chapter, can ya put rimming from Ginny to Ron. Did Ron rim to her?? If he did, then can she copy him, for every thing he does or she does that he will copy. It was a good story. Long or short rimming is good. Anal sex? Could include felsh (cum in anal to suck out), and blow job if ya did already to suck cum.
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They are certainly exploring to the max! I wonder what the fallout will be, or will they just continue in secret? They've seemed to have let go of all of their guilt...will it return when they have to get back? This chapter was fun and realistic and hot. Great update.
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn! this story is really hot. never thought i'd like incest, but DAMN this is really really HOT!
update soon! great story by the way
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations!

This story has been nominated for 'Best Oral' in the Smutastic Awards on LiveJournal!

To accept your nomination, please contact us at smutasticawards at yahoo dot com by October 16th.

Again, congrats!

Dynonugget, Smutastic Awards Moderator
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you it's great, please more