rate_review Reviews

I must say that I liked this chapter more than any other.

I still dont like this story but feel compelled to read it.

This is realy Good! I like how that i Know what realy Happend to Ginny And Snape !
Keep up the good work and please keep writing!

good update. as twisted as this story is at times i do enjoy it.

Oh my. I'm not sure I needed a whole long chapter of werewolf Snape-rape! ;-) I must say this story is extremely dark and it's not very easy for me to read. Perhaps because it is too well written. A lot of super-dark fics here have this slightly unreal quality to it, usually either because the writers are not good enough and it comes across rather ridiculous, or because you can feel it's really a filler and they don't quite believe it themselves. Yours is too good for comfort, though. Definitely not an easy read for me. Interesting hints at the possible subversion there. Wouldn't a lower-rank werewolf be always submissive to their alpha, though? How is it that Borowiec can work against Greyback? I'm sure you will make that clear later.

Intresting. I liekd all of it, but I think the best part was how you discribed Snape's school girl fanties. I expect most young teachers focus 'thoughts' on an older student or two (I would liek to think thats its Sr. year and up that are the target of these thoughts, so lets just pretend on that one) eespecialy when the teachers are enar in age to the students.

Intresting start, will there be more?

Well I'm glad Ginny is in the kitchen with her mother. I think? However, I still dont like the treatment Snape is reciving.

I liked the first part of this story very much and I like this one too, even if it's a lot darker. You are very good at rendering your characters and the way they are changed by war and suffering. This is particularly true for Ginny, whose transformation from an innocent girl to this hardened cynic is especially believable. I am looking forward to an update.

BTW, you got the inserted Czech expressions very wrong. I assume you used an internet translating engine? These don't work very well, unfortunately. "Pretty lady" would be "kr

(Chapter 3)

I liked the opening of this chapter, with Ginny's memory of the shark at the aquarium, it's relentless, paced back and forth swim, it's cold, black, dead eyes, and I never would have thought to equate a shark with Severus, but reading it here, it makes perfect sense. The same stoic, relentless waiting, the inscrutable black eyes. Very evocative.

The ending of the chapter was so sad and tragic, with Ginny crying in Molly's arms. The helplessness and hopelessness of the situation they find themselves in, the fear, it all comes through. Everything in between was excellent as well. Your writing is, again, so evocative....I read it and it's as if a film were running through my head. This story is dark and disturbing, horrific in some parts, but it's also completely enthralling and fascinating. I feel really lucky to beta for you, I get to read your excellent work first, and I'm just more and more impressed everytime.