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Oh, you do spin a mighty interesting tale. A secret twin, a wondering mother and a grieving man. I cant wait to see what happens next...and Molly! BAD BAD Molly!

Red

Oh lordy.

She's gone again? You're killing me.
Where is Hermione's baby? Where is my plot bone??? Why isn't he with uncle Harry???
Miscarriages, eh? Whatever. You need longer chapters :o)

That being said, why was it so important for Nalina to get married before Snape and pretty, little, dead Nalina had their baby? Why was it so important that Lucius needed to get drunk in the wine cellar of the church after the wedding was stopped?

I'm curious though, what did Ginny fine? Why is it so important that she didn't tell Draco what she read and Lucius stopped her? And what does that all have to do with Severus' marrying pretty, little dead Nalina before she gave birth?

And what the bloody hell?! Where did Hermione go? again?!! Geesh.

I must say though, as I said before, I'm glad this emotional abuse is over for now. The mystery and adventure sets in and I'm a happy Sasha :o) Literally can't wait for your next updates!
Yay!



Make it soon (as long as you get your homework done!!!)
:o)

Sasha

Good thing on the other side of this computer you are. The disturbance that Albus felt was the collective scream from all your readers. On that note, I think I'll just go to bed. Have to go to work tomorrow anyway.

Um no offence was that a part of this story cause I am now lost.
I like this story and I would really hate for it to become lame
just because your trying to update fast for us readers. I would
rather wait 2-3 week months even for a great ch then 1 day for a quick
update. Maybe after the next ch or two this one will make more
sense to me I sure hope so. Well hope you kick you muse in the ass
sorry if I upset you I really didnt mean to just givin my oppion
des

Eject...eject...eject...Yoda? 1. Please don't answer reviews in the opening of your story. And if you must do this because you can't figure out how to do it on the review board, certainly don't make these answers longer than the chapter you post.
2. And speaking of chapter length, you are not posting what would be considered a chapter. Make them longer, more structured and in line with the last chapter. This chapter is the second (or third...can't remember) time you have go so totally off track with it's content and form that I had to hit my back button to make sure it was the story I was thinking of.

MmmHmmm
You see? Everyone's got their own agendas, especially every Malfoy. Ah, but Molly hiding an adulterous affair and it's someone who fathered Bill....
I keep coming back to Lucius, people. Bill is extremely hansome, yeah? IDK
Anyway, Lenore has more of a story to tell, obviously, so maybe she knows what the deal was with Nalina and her supposed baby that she apparently was carrying for over 10 months.
Hmm, do you think Lenore ever swapped places with Nalina when she was in the mood to get laid by tall, dark and beaky?

Did Lenore get pegged as magical and get sent an invitation to Hogwarts? If so, wouldn't have seemed a little more than coincidental that she and Nalina look exactly the same? That would be kind of hard to keep a secret from the entire student body, I would think.

I know, let's make a deal. Hermione gets her plants, finds the elusive recipe to create the cure for lycanthropy, restores her good reputation, takes her baby, leaves the country to get rich developing potions, and lives happily ever after with Charlie Weasley, while Snape spends the rest of his life regretting that he shunned his son, and pines away for Hermione.
Meanwhile, everyone else's secrets and lies are exposed and everyone ends up sad and miserable and lonely and hating eachother because that is what they deserve.

Okay, I had a migraine, took a painkiller, and couldn't sleep and I'm a little rummy right now. LOL

You are a genious. Severus has got to be beside himself. Hell I'm beside myself and I'm just reading a story (yes I know these are not real people I am just very fond of them.) Anyway Loved the Yoda line that was a classic. I can not fathom how the Weasleys fall into all of this. More specifically Molly she knows more than she lets on in my opinion and she can be easily lead astray. Will we ever find out who Bills father is? That one has me thinking out loud (the hubby thinks I've finally lost it.). Well this has put my poor kitty in a coma you have gone so far and beyond that I daresay this is one of the best stories I have read in a very, very long time. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!!

Excellent. I liked that how you wrote that Nalina was a twin and thought it was nice that she talked to Hermione and then told Severus everything. I hope that Molly Weasley will eventually tell more about why she did what she did. I think that maybe someone has some information on her(possibly the fact that Arthur isn't Bill's father) and that is why she took Lenore away. I hope that Hermione will be found soon. I look forward to reading more.

I like it. Please update soon.

I do not like this at all. It seems that poor Hermione is fated to have that silver haired wench haunt her for the rest of her days. Severus will never love Hermione with a living breathing version of his Nalina walking about. Just great, just great. I'm not even going to complain about anything.