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schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Greetings Readers!

I apologize for my absence! There was so much going on here
person sevsgirl
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cinderell! Cinderelli!

Off your tushy, Cinderelli!

Write a chappie. Make it snappy!

And in the end, we'll all be happy!

Welcome back Cinderelli!

schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eh, okay.
More nakedness. Sure why not, LOL.
I'll bite my comments and wait for the next chapter, to formulate some more theories. :o)
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more between Snape and Hermione. Keep up the good work.
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was great. I hope that Someone will be able to find Severus and Hermione soon before the end up dying from the cold. I look forward to reading more to see what Ginny is hiding and what Lucius has to do with it.
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Now that I'm all caught-up... wow. There's so much here, but thankfully as odd as some of the connections and circumstances are; it doesn't feel like a soap opera anymore. Well, there is the now naked big boobed (1) twin sister seperated at birth... And copulating forced-together by hypothermia cabin-bound impossible twosome... But at least it seemes like there's the beginings of something. Something good can happen. Or not. Though if this is a morality-tale where things always work out with rainbows and unicorns for the heros and the bad guys get the boot then Ginny's in for some serious comeuppance. But then you always defy the stereotypes, so I guess my money might be on Evil!Ginny walking away without a scrape. Oh, not that I was surprised that she was forceably not trying to conceive. I just wonder how things got to the point where she was nearly wretching with the thought of carrying the-love-of-her-life's child. What went so horribly wrong for Ginny to totally fall out of love for Harry? Hmmm???? Gonna answer that one for me? Inquiring minds still want a name for the boy, but at least the naming has been addressed.
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, terrible thought but I have a suggestion for the boy's name.

Granger Snape.

Hey, this is the new milenium. People are giving lastnames to children as first names. I point to any wacked out celebrity as fodder for my case.

Not terribly inventive as a name (thought it does have some cool to it) but given Ministry records, that might be the name he's recorded with.

Take the suggestion and do what you will with it.
person Electrical Storms
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay - an update! Okay, this is good stuff. Ginny's character is really getting good. I wonder if she married Harry in good faith to begin with or if there was some ulterior motive there that just didn't work out, and it made her want to get rid of the pregnancy. In any event, a juicy development there with Ginny. Can't wait to see what Lucius has on her. I love a good story of intrigue! ::shivers with anticipation::

The Lenore and Harry sex-fest - I find myself applauding Harry. He deserves some happiness - or at least a good roll in the hay- after what Ginny just did to him. I hope it works out for those two. Now wouldn't that be some crazy salad!

Okay, I have to admit no matter how well they care for Hermione's baby I still want Hermione to get her son back and to be the great success she's destined to be. She'll crack the case, I know she will. She's too smart not to. Poor Hermione; her hormones must be going bonkers. It would be great for Snape to (eventually, we hope) get his head out of his ass and recognize her for the jewel she is - as is his son. But it's going to be a really good journey getting there - fantastic chapter! I loved it! More, more, more! ;0
person cranky reviewer
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok. What's the best way to put this?.....

Where the hell have you been?

After all this time - ONE chapter?!

Are you kidding?!

One more today and a couple tomorrow and I'll think about forgiving you.

Tick tock Cindy, time's a wastin.