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schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I generally dont review before a fic is complete and Ill admit, Im bad about reviewing in general....its an interesting premise so far. I get the feeling that the child the girl carries isnt snapes...that he is marrying her to save her rep...question is, whose child is it? I have theories of course, assuming that my assumption is correct....one a bit squicky....one that raises a whole new world of scary possibilities and a few others that are more romantic and make me chuckle a little....(wouldnt it be a hoot if Neville Longbottom or a Weasly knocked up Malfoy's daughter hehe)

As long as Sev doesnt end up being a complete fucker and debaucher Im good. I love Severus and always love to read stories where he finds happiness and love, hes had such a miserable life already, he needs no more =)


Alright, I will continue to have a nosy through the story as you update!

Happy Writing!
S_G
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE it, just Love it. Keep up the great work kid
I want to find out what happens next!
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter. Two pregnant ladies, what is Severus going to do now? I hope that he will end up with Hermione and not Lucius' daughter. Maybe her baby isn't his. That would put a twist to things. I can't wait to read more.
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person wudelfin
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what comes to mind is "oh shit" or is it "bugger"?
person anncee
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooohhhhh sh*t....hahhaha love it! can't wait to see where this goes!
person nastygrl
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy cow! Awesome beginning!!! Keep writing!
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh sweet cruelty is thy name. lol Great start, I'm hooked already. I have so many questions. Like who was Snape marrying? How did Ginny get Hermione to change her mind about the baby and tell Severus? What's Severus going to do now? I'm dying to know, PLEASE update soon!!
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting beginning. I can't wait to see what happens.
person Annon
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed what was here and hope to see more later, but there is one small little thing that I think may have been an oversight.