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schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is better then the soap's!!!!!
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person neelix
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That'll teach him!!

lmao! I so hope you can update quickly!
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I'm upgrading to cruel and unusual punishment here. I'm so on edge here I don't what to do. I'm actually feeling a bit lost and short of breath. lol This is awesome. So the bride is preggers too? Is Severus really the father of that baby? If Lucius is trying to salvage a bastard daughter I wouldn't put it past him to find a way to get the girl pregnant by some Tom, Dick, or Harry and then some how pin it on Severus to get him to marry the girl. Or offer him some exorbitant amount of money to get him to marry the girl even if the kid isn't his, or blackmail...or, oh dear. Just, update. Soon. With longer chapters and more information. I don't think my heart can take another one of your cliffhangers. Their rather intense. lol I can't wait for more!!
person neelix
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooohhh... intruiging!! WHO is Severus marrying?????? And more to the point, why did he decide to marry someone else after sleeping with hermione???

In a hail of question marks.... Nice start love!
person kittycat30
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm hooked! I can't wait to read more!
person Angie30
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa another riviting chapter! Hope Hermione is alright. Can't wait for an update!
person Soleklart
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No no no. I need more chapters. NOW! *puppy eyes*
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was w great start ..please please update soon .. later for now

angel