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Nalina sounds like a spoiled brat if you ask me. And, like Hermione, I'd like to strangle Ginny too. LOL

Red

Can't help the question -- since when does Lucius Malfoy have a daughter? Is she Draco's twin? Younger but went to school out of country? Is she knocked up with Sev's baby too? If he's so in love with the twit, why was he at a bar fucking strange women at about the same time he knocked her up? Is he marrying her as a favor to Malfoy and, if so, why is he acting all in love. Ew. Please don't let Hermione give up her baby to him and the Malfoy twit. At least let her keep her own baby, please.

An excellent chapter. I hope that when Hermione has the baby, it will look exactly like Severus, proving that it is his child. As for Nalina, I hope that her child will end up not being his, but will belong to someone else. I look forward to reading more.

Ugh, what a mess! I suppose they're both his, then? Because the last time I checked the laws of the universe, Severus only sleeps with/impregnates Hermione... (kidding, kidding, I hope you can hear my dry humor =P) I'm anxious to know what comes of all of this. Please, write on!

argh! what a jerk. your severus is a jerk! grrr.
he fathered TWO kids?
update soon, i'm on team ginny weasley, she's making all the sense in this story! :o)

I like it. Please update soon.

Two thoughts:

I didn't understand the line in the earlier chapter that her mistake was to keep the floo connection open and Ginny retrieving her scarf. That didn't seem to have any relevance to how the plotline later developed.

I did not fail to notice that the chick Sev's marrying is remarkably similar in description to how Hermione had glamoured herself. Malfoy blond with grey eyes. Maybe it was an adequate assumption when she turned up preggers that he was the sperm doner. I hate to think that a drunken bathroom shag was catalyst for him seeking out similarly looking females in some unrequited love mess.

well this simply will not do!! what about lucius' daughter?? does severus love her? is SHE carrying severus' child too?!?! AAHHHHHH hurry and update so i can knowwwwwwwwwwwww!!!

Uh oh. So wait. Does Severus REALLY care about Lucius's daughter? NOOOOOOOO! Say it isn't so! PLEASE!!!! And it can't be his kid....the one Malfoy's daughter is carrying. It has to be a set up.



This is what I shall continue to believe until you update and set the record straight. Yep. So you better, you know, update. Soon. Please?

very very good. more *looks blood thirsty*