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Oh I hope it's too late and Hermione gets attached to her baby and can't go through with giving him up. Please? And that was sad what happened to Severus and Nalina. Perhaps Severus can find solace if not with Hermione, but with his newborn son. A reason to go on living life and all that. Anyway, talk about twists galore. What does Draco have to do with all this? And he and Ginny are 'together'?! Get back here!!

Okay. So I'm feeling throughly depressed now. I know, I know. We can't just expect Severus to be all rainbow and puppies at the moment. But what a horrible thing to say about a child. A child who had no say, who had nothing to do with any of what happened. I can understand his anger at Hermione....as much as it isn't her fault, I still understand it. Anyway, can't wait for more.....hopefully happy stuff? Like Hermione deciding at the last minute to keep the baby? Please?

*gets bat* Bad Severus! That's not how you talk to Hermione.

Anyway, this could turn out to be quite interesting.

My, this certainly is a unique story. I hope Severus' harsh rejection ( abominiation gods!) of their son, makes her change her mind about rejecting him herself, and keeping him. Any Severus/Hermione closeness seems pretty hopeless now, but, being a hopeless romantic, I will cross my fingers for them.

This has some strong emotion in it. It tears you up and brings you down to their level, allowing you to feel what they feel. God, i couldn't imagine losing so much in so little a time. Life is harsh for poor Severus, and i feel he deserved his happiness with Nalina and his child, and damn Fate takes it away.

Poor Hermione as well. She never intended this to happen, let alone have him think that she was the whole cause of this tragedy. She isn't. I have a feeling that she isn't, that it's Fate, so to speak, that is using her to be involved in this bizarre and tragic event thats happened to these people. I mean she was at that bar for a reason, and so was Severus.

I do wonder how it will play out. Looking forward to more,

Wolf

It is Ginny's fault. I mean she always loved a scandal. I don't see why she had to creat a scene. Why she had to stop the wedding. It could have been another time, before or after, even. But not during.

Oh... I think my heart is breaking. Beautifully done, but now i am crying.

Please update soon.

*chants*
More, more, more, more, more.

O-kay some how Snape see's his child for the first time and fall's in love with him.

Wow. I didn't expect you to kill off the Malfoy girl. I guess, by the worried and desperate way she was acting, I thought that she was actually carrying somebody else's baby but wanted to trap Severus into marriage before he figured it out. Well, even if she's a goner, I hope you didn't kill her innocent baby, too. I still hope that it turns out that Nalina's baby was not fathered by Severus, though. As for Hermione, I hope she keeps her baby -- she deserves to be happy and it IS her baby.

I STILL say that if Severus loved Nalina so much, he wouldn't been out at bars picking up other women and having sex at about the same time that he supposedly impregnated his fiance. Regardless, the age gap arguement between Hermione and Severus will be a moot point in this world.

Keep posting until finished, please. I'm still looking for the final chapters in Pillow Fight...