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This is turning out to be a very interesting spin. I cant wait to see where Hermione turns up and how Severus responds.

Red

You have lost your mind! I do intend that to be a compliment. This stroy is very imaginative and I can not wait to see what you have in store. If this is a Severus/Hermione I don't have a clue of what you will do to get them together. That scene in the garden was beyond harsh. I know Severus is snarky and he has lost more than any man should but, I would think that he would at least want to know his child. I don't know why he hated Hermione so much previously, was it because of the typical Gryfindor know-it-all thing or has something else occured. I am so looking forward to more. Well done!!!!!!!

Okay.
He doesn't DESERVE the baby boy, then. Fine. Someday he'll probably regret it, no matter who ends up raising him. It's ironic how some people think that the only way to deal with their own grief is to be cruel and hurtful to others.

I STILL say that she should keep HER baby. Fuck him. As his excuse for "one drunken mistake" in impregnating her and creating the "abomination," it's just a convenient scapegoat. A man in love, no matter how drunk, wouldn't cheat on his fiance. Methinks he doth protest too much.

And I'm still wondering after Nalina's panic to hurry up and get married, as well as what Draco and Ginny were plotting....and why. With no love between Severus and Hermione, what the hell was the point of ruining the wedding, unless Nalina was being duplicitous? Or something....

There just seems to be something off.

I could care or less if Snape ever even likes Hermione but I'd like to see her keep her own baby. But that's just the maternal instinct in me kicking in, LOL.

Hey realy like this story, sad but good. However i thought this was a hermione/snape story it doesn't seem like they will get together. and does hermione keep the baby?

love it cant wait to read more please update soon and i think Hermione should keep the baby

Ouch! I don't think I can read any more. I understand his grief and his need to lash out but there was no need for him to take it out on the child. It was not his fault that the daughter of the other woman died with her, I don't believe for one moment that that was Hermione's intention, to replace that child with hers. If he is going to be like this for the rest of the story I don't think I can continue to read this. Perhaps when it is all over I will peek at the last chapter to see the conclusion of this sad little tale. I will probably not last that long so I await your response to this review in the next chapter. Good day madam!

Oh your Snape is one nasty piece of work.
Hmm, goodness I must be a hopeless romantic, lol, still hoping he's gonna love the little baby, if not Hermione.
Update soon.

the grief from both sides was felt. interesting enough I would have loved to have seen the child survive.

Oh. Let's just take a moment to breathe on that...

I felt that punch to the gut.

Seriously I don't have any clue how this will be a HG/SS story past what it is right now. I almost see next chapter ending with HG back to killing lycans with a housefull of cats. The end. To make any attempt at returning to talk to him would be so completely crass. (And then she'd have the award for swinging the biggest pair - not you m'dear) Wow. To inflict herself on him like that. Wow. Even if he's wrong in blaming her, showing up to his garden like that was tasteless. People who are that raw in their grieving should be allowed their time to be. Sending an owl would have been much smarter. Impersonal, but smarter.

And of course, even in death, Albus' ego knows no bounds. He has to stir the cauldron.

But what of the boy? What indeed. Thus far it seems that baby is the only one who isn't a complete fuckhead. That, and I really liked the kicking everytime she used the 'A' word.

Oh I did not see that one coming... and apparently Nahlina didn't either. That took balls woman. Usually fans scream foul when characters get killed off. Not that Nahlina was scoring brownie points either, but damn. How cold. And what drama. I some how really don't think some megawat switch will be thrown and Sev immediatly fall head over heels for the Gryffindor witch and kid. Maybe feel responsible for the boy though. I'm thinking in terms of American muggle laws when I consider parental rights. If he's the legal father, she may not be able to arbitrarily sign over the adoption papers without his consent... which I don't see Severus doing either. Oooh... plot thickens. I can't wait to see what becomes of this mess.