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for Insatiable

by moirasfate

person Persy
schedule May 9, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Awww, how precious and sweet!!!!

person Anon
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. I did so enjoy that. *goes off to find a Snape to shag* Poor old bugger, getting all bruised and broken. I do like that idea. :) Cheers.

~CC
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Incredible. Too bad it's only a one shot. It would be better if you could make it longer to see where their relationship goes.
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
my dear moirasfate,

Congratulations, on a job thoroughly well-done! You walked a fine line, and kept both Hermione and Severus well within the bounds of Canon Characterization, for an AU situation. As well as Minerva.

I loved this PWP; excellant, even without the 'normal' graphic details. Sometimes things are best left to the imagination of the reader---allowing us to supplement the details of the trysts for ourselves.

Please consider writing another tale, if not expanding upon this one, then a new one. You are, indeed, a most talented story-teller.

Sincerely, Victoria Prince