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for Unchain My Lust

by HildaMalfoy

schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Sending a love filled review to the muse* That was great, so why on earth did you stop there? What are the runes about...the armbands...the sex magic book??? Please! I need more!

You have set up an excellent premise for a hot story. Hermione's loathing of Lucius is perfect grounds for some steamy 'investigations' into the Sensual delights for Master and Pet book.

Looking forward to more when your muse is sufficiently fed!
MHS
person Malfoysplaymate
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great start! Hope you update soon!
person Voracious_Reader
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this looks like fun! I'm laughing already at this one. i hope you update soon?
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful beginning. I can't wait to read more to see what happens now that they are chained together.
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
~*Hilda*~

A very intriguing beginning!! I cannot wait to find out what happens next....

Update soon, if you can!!

Lady B*
person jaimelee
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you really need to continue this story!! I want to see how it all turns out... and poor Lucius... being disowned by Draco.
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
giggles...thats amusing....more please
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aw, don't leave it there. You are continuing it right? It's just too damn good to not know what happens next!