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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to the next chapter to see what happens.
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY update! oh it was wonderful! Hope you come back soon!
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, does the chain make you be honest to the person on the other end. Not that I'd have a problem with being chained to Lucius, not really. This is interesting, I hope you continue.
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear... Hermione seems so young in this story... yet she's an adult. Poor girl. She's suffering far too much. By the way, I loved how you made Ron small. LOL! Please update soon. I can't wait to see them together, and hopefully "in-love".
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
She needs to be spanked. Poor Lucius. He would only use a little bit of poison. Can't wait to read more. I'm loving this!
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it. And I hope she dumped Ron in this story...or that he at least knew she was bored in bed with him ;) can't wait for Lucius to spark the fire...and then some ;)
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well chatty muse, I'm a bit torn - spanking or love? Difficult choice but based on how awesome this chapter was, I'll give you tons of love. I'm so glad you continued cos this is setting up to be great, especially if they have to work their way through the whole book. I am loving their banter and you are really writing both characters well.
I wish I was doomed to have sex with Lucius. If Hermione has any more issues with it, I'm ready and willing to be chained to him instead. Yum!
So looking forward to chapter 3!
I wish I was doomed to have sex with Lucius. If Hermione has any more issues with it, I'm ready and willing to be chained to him instead. Yum!
So looking forward to chapter 3!
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, the interactions between Lucius and Hermione and wonderfully constructed. Can't wait for more!!
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well i love the story! i do hope that you have lots more to come and that the muse is having lots of ideas for you to use! poor hermione i think if she can just get past her fears and sucspicion of him and learn to trust him they could have a wonderful relationship! :) well for that to happen that you will be a while writing! YEAH for me! :) lucius would so spoil her and pamper i think they both could love and deal with that! so you wil be post soon, wont you?
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I like this. It promises to be as interesting as it should be entertaining. I LOVES LUCIUS! Hope that this helps feed the muse.