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for Unchain My Lust

by HildaMalfoy

person Citten
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am just loving this story and i do hope that you have antoher chapter coming soon!!! :) dear hermione she is like so many women does not tell the man her real fears and thus leaving the boy thing in the dark! okay i do hope that some of hermiones views start to change or at least are given to opening up to the possiblities of what really is! dear sweet lucius--he is so trying to help her relax. :) this next chapter will be lots of fun! :) i love how you have paced this story it will be very enjoyable (and long!) and i cant wait!!!!!!!!! :)
person Coipje
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it :D update soon please :D
person CoCoM
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this beginning! I am very interested to see all of the different sensual avenues our lovely couple will go down. Looking forward to your next update already...
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So, Chained until he feels she has learned enough about sexual pleasure for his purposes? Hmm...How long does a post-doctorate thesis and internship take, anyway? Sign me up! Oh, and if the muse is feeling well-fed, we'd love to see as much as she feels willing to provide?
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You better update soon! If you don't, I will hold my breath until I pass out. This is so HOT! Need more LUMIONE. Your making me wait is like being cruciated! *Writhes about* Please update. ALSO YOU SHOULD UPDATE THE DRACO/HERMIONE story you are writing. That is my favorite DM/HG story EVER! I am needy! -pouts-
person jaimelee
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh... man, I wish there were more guys out there like Lucius. His manners are something to be desires. =) Please update soon.
person Terrie
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The third chapter was really well written. I like the slow build up.
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is fun
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay here's my love...now where's the rest? lol Great job, I'd love more!