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for Unchain My Lust

by HildaMalfoy

schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. I'll skip the chocolate frog in favor of another great lemon. ;P
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*happy dance* I can't believe my luck! Updates for two Malfoy fics in one day! *hugs plot bunny* I just do not know what to do with myself. I loved it. Hermione is treating Lucius right! Lucius needs to find a nice witch. Please, more than six chapters. I LIKE THIS! Hope to read more soon...like maybe tomorrow...*looks hopeful*
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. I would like more chapters. A suprise baby would be interesting too.
person Lexi
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, you've just got to update. Saw the first chappie on fanfiction.net and found the rest here.
You've got the greatest plot here and you write very well
person jaimelee
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice work.. I can't wait to read more, and find out what happens. It sucks that she's comparing him to Ron just a little.
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
person Voracious_Reader
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Would someone please clone Lucius? Or even more effective, have him write a sex manual for men? Patience, control, attentiveness, etc.are things we ALL want in a partner! He makes the Kama Sutra seem like the manual to my microwave. Sigh. More, please!
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MOre! More please! Please! I loved that. Lucius is so sweet!
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a beautiful chapter...he was patient and gentle with her xxx 10/10
person Miss Lilac
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DAMMMMMN This is smokin'! I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter, much bookmarked! *Drool* I am indeed liking this story alot hun!