rate_review Reviews

What happened to Harry? What is he is carrying the only heir the Malfoys will ever have and he needs to get his magic back or the child will die?

i liked the way the story went.. but i felt no emotions building up.. especially disappointed when draco died and i didn't feel torn and anguished.. why? bcause you're not writing the characters feelings.. you're not delivering them as well as you probably could.. it's like a script.. there are no thoughts and emotions aside from the speech..

anyway.. liked the story, didn't like the non-emotion feel of it..

I'm sorry, but I'm not a huge fan of the dialogue only. I feel you are much better, or at least more practiced, at writing longer stories. I love your story with Lucius/Harry, but this was just cutting out too much of the plot and seemed overworked.

pansy's plan backfired. poor harry. he's about to wish he was dead.

damn. i shouldnt have read it after i saw it contained death. but then i look at the author and its u and i think, oh no way could it be harry or draco. jeez, was i way off. but other than that major detail, i liked it.