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such a hot chapter hun! I love where you're going with this! I love the way you portray your Draco! So creative and sexy! You made a few typos and grammar mistakes though. This is such a good story but I sometimes find myself having to reread things to understand what you're trying to say! Don't worry about it though I make lots of mistakes too. Can not wait to see how Draco reacts to her coming back!!!

oh my gosh,firstly I want to thank u for the chappy dedication and the appreciation of my review, I am glad it did inspire you and kept u motivated. I am suprised of the lack of reviews for this story, but dont worry it will come along give it time. Oh and this chapter was so intense and emotional, it seems like every time they venture into one of these escapades they become unwilling closer and things get more complicated. That necklace has some story to it, and I cant wait to find out. And oh my god she did beg him to fuck her, that was brutal, I really cant wait for the next chapter, and u have a great story, but there are alot of typos, I hipe u find a beta cuz u r a great writer. again i am honoured for the hail out and acknowledgement, and I only speak the truth in my reviews, and I am glad that they truly help. Update soon.

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Nice this was the best!
I can't wait for the next update, this was fantastic.

OHMG, OMFG ADDICTDRAGON,
This is some story, it is sorching, hot, tension filled, drama entwined, emotions running wild, and potentially dangerous for all those involved. Oh I smell the storm brewing and I absolutely love the long chapters, poor hermione the poor girl doesn't know up from down and i don't know what exactly is gonna happen but i am scared for her, because i could see her getting so hurt and betrayed in the future, draco is his usual snarky, sexy, egotistical prat and I wouldn't have it any other way. You have down to a T in my opinion.
Their encounters have left me begging for more, but part of me just wants hermione to tell malfoy shove it all to hell, cause he will break her so badly, and he still her under him in more ways than one. That last chapter had me stupified how she brought herself three orgsams looking at herself in the mirror and thinking of him, and he heard it all, OMFG, OMFG. I was sweating bullets, thats probably the rawest thing I have read hermione doing so bluntly, and did sweetly. Oh the potion you put up on the 5th chapter was very interesting, and I think sanpe would be proud at it complexity and originality, it was mind blowing, I wanted to go and make it...lol. Oh and the story about lady helen and Gallant, it was so beautiful and sad, sniff, sniff...lol.
Another thing Kamilla, I dont know what to think about her, I thought she was geniune but she is a slytherin, but she did seem like she really wanted to help hermione, but then draco pulled that shit with the other girl and I loved the way she reacted and portrayed the third participant in the play, she was good. Draco's taunting and his hot words are the bane of my exsistence, something he says something and it HOLY, BLOODY HELL, COLD SHOWER NOW!!!!!! *shakes Head*
Gods I cant wait to read more, more, more, brilliant writing, and I love the storyline, and i hope draco stays his angsty snarky self for a while, cause if he suddenly change it would make no sense, and really hope poor hermione will survive, she is really mixed up emotionally. UPDATE.

Hot!!! You never fail to impress!!! keep up the great work! I love how you're showing their thoughts and feelings! \(^-^)/

i love it!

First off I thought this story just your run of the mill dramione, BOY HOW WRONG AM I? It is filled with so much emotion and twists and turns and happenings that it literally had my mind spinning in all the possibilities of this fic and I literally drooling for more, great long chapters, so much tension and OH Fucks!!! the first 4 chapters had squealing like a banshee and here is my honest review from a fangirl. The honest angst, sexual tension, the anger and confusion of their situations is making it all so real. So much happened in 4 chapters that it left me wondering, frightened, and excited at the same time for the rest of the story, and hermione her pain and loneliness is raw it is painfull and I could so understand it. Oh and I got jealous of draco for hermione everytime he was with someone else, and I am also a little worried for with this bet. I am chewing out my nails, and I still 2 new chapter to read so yayyyyyy. And I wanted her to rip that tom guy to pieces, to bad draco held her back. Keep up the brilliant work and long chapters.

Ahh! I'm actually loving this story. Hoping Draco doesn't turn out to be an asshole though! Update soon!

oh i loved it and i miss it the first time but you spelled slytherins wrong.

thanks for the story. I really enjoyed it.
Can't wait till you update.