rate_review Reviews

This is a very good plot! I like it a lot. Despite the grammar errors which could be taken care of by a beta, it is a very good read. There is a balance between the sexual and non-sexual parts of the plot and it flows quite well.

BTW, if you need a beta, I'd be happy to help. :)

dont worry hon, atleast i am still here, and RL is very important and so is school, you r forgiven and if anyone really loves your story they would be loyal, ppl have left stories for years before they finish them and they have their readers so have no fear. looking forward to reading more though. Hope u r well.

respect
Scarlet

Maybe Draco should just relieve her stress himself...that dirty, talking, hot, smexy bastard!

i love this story how could you leave it hanging like that lol...i cant wait until u put up more chapters and i hope its soon. :-)

Wow. This is a great story. I just have some issues with the misspelling of names (Neville, McGonagall, etc.) and the grammer. You may need to fix those issues and re-edit the chapters before you post them, with a fresh set of eyes (i.e. type and look at the chapter the next day). This is not meant as a flame, for I have really enjoyed this story.

freaking long ,long chapter, it was madness, I was on the edge of the cliffy with the cliffy u left us with in chap10, but in chap 11 I wanted her to make draco squirm and grovel alot more, and boy that ALMOST SMUT SCene was.....falls of chair*. There was alot of things I want to say about the chapter especially i love where the story is going, and I so scared for hermione when she came back through the floo, and I wanted to strangle draco, but draco really did save her alot, and what about pansy, isnt she a liability with telling the carrows what was going on with draco and hermione. maybe we will be seeing her again causing trouble as usual. But the chemistry between your hermione and draco is scorching, and geez that girl cant seem to keep much clothes on around him can she, its like see draco, clothes dissappear...rofl. And what is the deal with that necklace, I know its something big. Girl thanks again for the long chapter. Update soon.

Hi - sorry, the whole thing with the Carrows threw me...why are they at the school?? Did I miss something in one of the chapters? It's just very left field that Death Eaters are at the school and that it's ok. If I missed in a chapter, please point it out.

GREAT scene at end...just a note that you need a Beta to help with grammar, just makes it hard to read (no a flame by the way, I think its a HOT story).

This story is really amazing, i cant wait for an update :)
You really encapsulated the characters, great job
you better not wait too long, im on a cliff here!
Scarlets Angel x

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*stares in disbelief at addict* One minute hermione raging hell on the lying bastard and the next the war is rushed up on them like a slap in the face. I loved raging hermione, and I almost felt sorry for draco, ALMOST!!! but I love that he was determined to save her. Ron BETTER GET HIS ACT TOGETHER!!! And I loved the cold and empty but warrior hermione walking back into the snake pit. I have a couple songs for this chapter and its all for meh girl Hermy: Godsmack - I fucking Hate you, Marilyn Manson - Better of two Evils, Evanesscence - Lithium. And Holy SHIT!!!!!!!!!! that last the two lines were icing on a very fat, rotting cake. *passed out on the floor, not moving, gathering dust, becoming dust.....*

FUCKING UPDATE
RESPECT
SCARLET

did I mention I loved this chapter, and it was a total-floor-vanishing-out-from-under-u, turn-completely-180-in-a-second chapter, LOVE where u r going with this, and I am actually very afraid for hermione. *sits in corner and whimpers*

Scarlet