rate_review Reviews

All I can think of is wow o.O~This story captivated me from the beginning, I just read your whole story nonstop overnight....its 8 in the morning here. that is how entranced i was by your story... you really do have amazing writing skills and creativity~this might be a long review seeing as i read the whole 19 chapters at once.~first. I think you managed to capture Draco's personality better than any fanfic author could have even managed to dream of.~I find it hard to explain why I love your writing style so much. I guess you could say its actually professional minus some of the spelling and grammar mistakes, which really weren't that big of a deal, your sentences are understandable so it works out xD~I think you should add a chapter on Hagrid and dean's little trip through the forest.~i reeeeeeeealy hope you update often... judging by your authors notes u seem to, you apologized for not updating for 3 weeks.(I really appreciate that by the way). I know some authors on this site that update a new chapter once every month or so >.>~I'm probably sounding redundant right about now so I'll try to close this review up as best as I can.~again I love your writing style and the way u managed to catch the main characters personalities so magnificently.I spent the majority of the day and night reading ur whole story.. I really hope you stick with this story, i can't speak for everyone else but you have me personally hooked, I most likely will be looking for updates daily =p. Keep up the amazing work, and don't let anyone put you down. You are an amazing writer =]p.s. I really hope you don't make any extended trips to Greece soon as i may have to hunt you down xD. Pansy is a bitch :D

And now a bit of romance in the face of this horror....some love to combat the hate....

Getting dark and getting interesting more than what it was.. We need some butt kicking in here as the soonest the best.... LOL

I'm reeling...holy crap -- that scene with Carrow had me trembling in fear....and Draco came to the rescue with Blaise. There's hope for them yet. Didn't Hermione understand and see behind Draco's words? She knows him better than that...do you think he realized that he called her "his" girl and that he noted he "loved" the fire in her eyes....probably not.

Great update.

OMG That was intense... and good... Keep them coming.

You have a pretty good story going here but please get a beta. Your grammar and punctuation errors detract from the story you're trying to tell. Otherwise, good job.

wow thats intense
i hope u update soon
i want to know what happens next!!
:)

I'm loving this story so far! But I do wish you'd get a beta; grammar and spelling mistakes can be distracting. Other than that, kudos on your writing!

Long Great and Fabulous... What more we can ask for.. Oh yeah a new chapter.... LOL Keep them coming is getting intresting.

glad you're back writing this - the turmoil and situation is getting darker and more dangerous.


once piece of con crit: can you give this a once over in terms of proofreading? the errors made it difficult to read. txs..looking forward to your update!