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November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
if they don't end up together, I'm going to bash my head in....lord.
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September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HE needs to save them all .. my poor and dear Draco.... What a situation!!!!!! Well we need to wait until next chapter, but I feel we are close to the final battle... More please!!!!!1
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September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice first chapter although it is spelled Neville (repeatedly wrong in chp. 1) and it is wear clothing, rather than ware clothing. Good story and keep up the good work!
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September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this rebellion led by Herminione thing that you've got going.
You really thought this story out, didn't you?
I don't mind the grammar mistakes so much.
Keep up the good work!
You really thought this story out, didn't you?
I don't mind the grammar mistakes so much.
Keep up the good work!
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September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Once again you wrote an outstanding chapter! I love the fact that just for a very very breif moment Ginny understood Malfoy.
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September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Unexpected but very intresting and insightful!!!!!!!! Specially for Draco's point of view... Please at some point let Hermione hear the "I love you", it is very important for both....... Sorry I am such a romantic soul........LOL
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Argh!
What comes next?
This is a great story. Not many people are good with plot, and you are.
Please continue!
What comes next?
This is a great story. Not many people are good with plot, and you are.
Please continue!
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August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Like so many comments before mine... I really like the plot and the story but all of your spelling and grammar mistakes are detracting from the story you're trying to tell.
If you look on the forums I'm sure there's at least one person that would be more than willing to be a proofreader for you. PLEASE get someone to go through it for you or with you. If you can't get someone online try someone in real life. A friend with a good grasp of the English language or maybe a teacher at a school that you go to. (If you go to school)
You should always have someone proofread your work before you post it, another set of eyes will help you catch any errors that you yourself missed the first time through.
Please don't be lazy, get a proofreader.
~Scarlet Snow
If you look on the forums I'm sure there's at least one person that would be more than willing to be a proofreader for you. PLEASE get someone to go through it for you or with you. If you can't get someone online try someone in real life. A friend with a good grasp of the English language or maybe a teacher at a school that you go to. (If you go to school)
You should always have someone proofread your work before you post it, another set of eyes will help you catch any errors that you yourself missed the first time through.
Please don't be lazy, get a proofreader.
~Scarlet Snow
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August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow Malfoy must be really messed up from gettin the mark or really hurt of Hermoine.
I can't want tell you update please do it soon.
Always love what you come up wit.
I can't want tell you update please do it soon.
Always love what you come up wit.
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August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My heart is so sad for my beautiful Draco.... and also for Hermione, they are so much in love and now... Well that is still to come... right? More please this is toooooo gooood.. LOL