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So far this is one of my new faves!!!!! Plz plz update soon!!!!! I just knew Malfoy would come to Granger for help!!!

Really, really love this plot line. I want to smack Hermione for being close-minded and unable to really put herself in Draco's position and see why and how his growing up years make him do the things he does... not that he should be doing them, but really she could cut him a little slack. However, this whole Hogwarts being taken over by death eaters thing is dragging on and I can't take the anticipation... PLEASE hurry and post more chapters soon!!!


P.S. A beta would not be a bad idea.

You have managed to created such confusion in me over Draco. On one hand I hate him and want Hermione to tell him to fuck off but on the other hand he is just sooo damn sexy. Good job :)

Great story! I cannot wait to see how it turns out! More, please!!! And if you need a beta/editor, please let me know!

omg! please update! your story is soooo goood!
please update soooon! :D:D:D

Your story really touches my heart now that I have read the whole thing and I am hoping for more.

Declarations and danger.......... Perfect combination of factors for an explosive battle.

Grammar needs some work and so does your spelling it is kind of distracting when one is trying to read your story. It is my suggestion that you get a beta to edit it before it is posted. I am only on the first chapter, so I will continue reading, hoping that this story will be a good one.

This is a very unexpected story. You are so crude in it and startling open about it. It took me about four days to read all of the chapters you have posted here. At first I was whining, mainly because of the spelling and grammatical errors, I find them really abominable and all and all you rock. I have no idea if you think yourself a good porn writer or not, but you really did a good of it and with it. All those other times in which they had been hot and heavy and they would get interrupted, wonderful Really angsty and off many cliffs. I would like to volunteer my services as a beta, but feel a bit frighten by the sheer amount of word count you compile per each chapter. If you promise to send me pieces I will consider it an honor to help you beta this story of yours. Think about and let me know my address is lizalya13@yahoo.com. If not interested in my small participation than please send me a notice as to when you post your next chapter.
Liz

haha. I totally knew right when I was reading em, that you put lyrics from Soulmate in there :D Awsome possum. :d Update soon plz@@