rate_review Reviews

i liked it a lot!

thanks for the reformat! Much easier on my eyes that way....so I have a question...is this it or is there more? I see potential for more. You did well with it, just some editing issues that you might go over again later and fix, nothing major, just some spelling and grammar issues. All in all it was a good story...or start to a story =) whichever way you choose to go. Ill check back to see if you take it further or not....good job!

Happy Writing!
S_G

Good begining, I'm expecting great things!

I desperately want to read it! But the lack of spacing hurts my eyes....might I beg you to reformat? Please? I really would love to read it.



Happy Writing!
S_G