rate_review Reviews

Wow. I could totally tell that it was part of your early writing by the length of your chapters. They used to be much shorter and more driven my dialogue. Now you've strengthened your writing up so that you don't have to depend as much on your dialogue (which by the way has only gotten better!) Lovely work and please put out a new story out soon.

I LOVE IT!!! And I loved that it is not complicated but straight forward with as little drama as possible. It could use some more details and descriptions but it is heartfelt and lovely.

SS/HG is my favorite. And you are so spoiling us. 2 chapter + Epilogue and a story I had never read before! SQUEE!! I just loved this story.

I can't wait for more of your stories. Especially, SS/HG!

That was a different story from you. I liked it because it was such Severus thing to do. Him just observing in his quite way and her noticing it but neither of them knowing what to do ( on Hermiones part anyway.). I'm just not sure what exactly Sevs intentions are. They may be quit obvious and I can read it over til I am blue in the face and I will still be on the fence about the whole thing. Either way it was well written and very sweet. I always love a Severus story. Well done!!!

That was so lovely - I especially loved the final touch about the Wellies. Thank you for sharing.

What a sweet story. This Snape is so very proper and, dare I say bashful. Their dates were so formal, it was great to have Hermoine (mildly) seduce him. I loved the way he could see her fantasy, the night they were patrolling. If I were Hermoine I would totally abuse his power, forcing all my naughty thoughts on him. This was a fun read, thanks for reposting!

This was really good. Hard to believe that it was a repost of one of your first forays into fan fiction. My first few fics (Hell even some of my more recent ones) were awkward and all over the map...I had so many thoughts running around in my head, it was tough deciding the best way to get my point across.

Yeah, it was fluffy and sweet but that made a refreshing change from some of the 'hard-ass Snape' type fics. I found it amusing that he was so shy, painfully so, that it could have cost him a chance with Hermione. I enjoyed this very much!

Thanks!
MHS

You hung onto this? You kept it to yourself...hidden away, gathering dust?

How could you! It was just perfect!!!!

Thank goodness someone nagged you!

I absolutely loved it. I love the many different facets to Severus Snape.

As soon as I started reading, I remembered the story. Of course, I love it!!! Nice and light, just right for today! Thanks for putting it up again!

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I just read that part that reminded me why this story had been stuck in my mind! The scene in the Great Hall when they show up wearing each others robes...I am glad that someone talked you into posting this again. And I really enjoyed 'Something In the Way She Moves'. When I come fome freom a grueling day at work or a rough day at the doctors with my oldest, your stories give me those few, precious moments where I can escape, if only for a little while. They have been an invaluable gift, and thank you so much for your talent and for sharing it with all of us.