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for In His Kiss

by soldiersgirl0709

person smmz79
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow they were sent to the principals office... ha ha that was funny i loved it and how nice was that for severus to hear that hermione was willing to leave the school for him....
person smmz79
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very sweet ending... nice fic... i loved it....
person smmz79
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmmm this is an interesting little fic.... severus really does watch her.... enough to know what she does on her walks and how she eats...
person smmz79
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice second chap i like hermione in this she is kind of distantand mysterious to severus and i think that is intriguing to her.... hmmm so he may walk with her at nights this should be interesting!!!
person smmz79
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow that was sweet and you are right this is some fluff but come on it is sweet and cute.... i love severus in anyway that he can be written esp snarky but fluff is great as well... so he got to see a little of her fantasies... nice.....
person smmz79
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awwww that was the sweetest kiss... wow and they have a date.... yeah how sweet is this fic... i am glad that you reposted this it is sweet
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Muffy
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely and romantic. I'm glad you put it back up. I think I've read all your completed chapter fics now. What an entertaining ride. Thanks!
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it when Hermione waved at him! SO CUTE! Must read more.
person Anon
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well done again,,i just love your stories..they are the best..i just loved picturing severus in this light,,so not his caracter..but loved it..and who doesnt love an aggressive Hermione..just love it when a woman taks charge..lol..she had him wipped..lol..did i mention i loved it,,great story..cant wait for the next Severus/Hermione..