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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

i loved this one shot and like all of your one shots i want you to make them a story.... with this scene somewhere in the middle.... great job as always!!!!

That is a good short story!I can see so much more that it can be.I hope you decide to keep on writing this.

Now I know this was meant to be a one-off, however, I really am quite curious to know of Hermione's reaction. Surely, although she may have fancied Snape in her own right, and perhaps didn't fancy Ron, surely she would be grieved over his death? And perhaps not warm to Severus right away. The line that comes to mind is Katrina's from Sleepy Hollow. "I have shed my tears for Brom, and yet I feel no sorrow, and my heart is open to you..." (I know that's probably poorly misquoted at best...but you get the idea) If you don't intend to add another chapter, perhaps I'll take a spin-off to it, directly quoting and crediting you of course.

~CC

Yeah, sorry about the chill, there, but I have a low tolerance for the betrayal of friends. Ron had it right in 'Sorceror's Stone (the Movie)' when he said that Harry getting through was what mattered, and then he lost it until the end of the series. Even then it was only guilt that brought him back, not really any kind of loyalty. I also have a low tolerance for women who settle for less-intelligent men, I guess. Please, think of the future generations! LOL.

Neat, quick and clean. As for your need to 'rehabilitate Ron', why bother? I always saw him as a young man made insecure and selfish by his financial status and being the sidekick of a more famous man and a far more intelligent woman. He's a decent strategist, but doesn't apply it to anything else since he's a Gryffindor. If he had been a Slytherin, he would have been advising his father on getting ahead and making plans for his future. he's a prat.

Voracious Reader: Brrrrrr. Oooh, that's cold . . . and what's more . . . I hate to say it but your summation of Ron is quite compelling if you look at the evidence. I remember his reaction to Harry being in the Tri-Wizard Tournament. It took Harry almost getting killed before he came around. But . . . that's kind of what's good about Ron, he does eventually come around and despite him being a prat, he's reactive, but a loyal prat in the end. Then again, I have a habit of trying to find the good in people. Prats or not. lol. Thank you for commenting. If anything, I'll find use for that point of view in the future, and maybe feel less guilty when the bashing continues. And, it will continue, because it's just so FUN! lol.

If he was dumb enough to challenge Snape I say he deserves what he got!

More killing Ron!

Poor Ron! JKR's Ron is really a very nice boy, just not suitable for Hermione!! Evidentally Emma Watson agrees because in an interview for a French magazine she thought Hermione would be attracted to an older, very intelligent man. Hmmmm . . .