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for Forgetting Ron

by Ms_Figg

person Anon
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Muffy
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hee! Nicely done...and he didn't even have to die (Ron that is) *snort* Thanks!
person Tenar10r
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good like always!
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There are times when I just want to choke the life out of the two-faced, two-timing SOB that is Ronald Weasley.
Snape was right, Ron never deserved her. Ron deserves whatever kind of misery Lav-Lav will heap upon his life. You know the saying, once a cheat always a cheat. Lavender had no qualms about stealing someone else's husband, so if she ever gets the inclination, she could very well do it again.

You amaze me Ms_Figg! You are constantly reinventing the story, manipulating the story in such a way that it carries an entirely different and completely plausible plot from JKR's original. As much as I love your long stories...I am currently enjoying Glass & Turn and my favorite of your older works has to be It Happened One Hallow's Eve...I just can't pass up the chance to read your PWPs or oneshots. They are just too good to miss! I can't wait to see where you will take this story.

Looking forward to your next update!
MHS
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HA! HA! I knew Ron's precious Lav-Lav would eventually pile on the pain and misery in his life. The nerve of that weasel, even thinking that he could get Hermione to take him back after he left her for that dirty slag.

You really know how to spin an amusing tale, Ms_Figg. I enjoyed it very much, thanks!
MHS
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wouldnt say it wasnt much of a story LOL it was just wrapped up quickly =) I found it quite delightful, personally. I thought it beautiful and I love any story that involves Ron getting kicked to the curb as it were.


Happy Writing!
S_G
person MB3
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not much of a story? It was adorable!! I absolutely loved it. Just long enough to read on a quick break. I like that Ron got his comeuppance for leaving Hermione.

I'm a big fan of "A Turn for the Better" by the way. I liked the last chapter and am looking forward to further updates along with any other short stories you might produce in the meantime.
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh you naughty woman! You really have no stopper do you??
When I read the first chapter all I could think about was that scene in Monsters Ball, Make Me Feel Good.
Loved the whole thing and its prob the closest thing to a PWP you've stuck to in a while.

Kudos

Danni
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
not much of a story?! It was awesome - Ron shrivels into non-existence when Severus makes his mark. Lucky Hermione! Another excellent fic.
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! I loved it! So sweet and just what I needed to read today. As always thank you for sharing!