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for Hollowed

by dirtydarella

schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved the update! Kitchen 1 Draco 0 ^_^
person lilly
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhhhh! update! Please?
I love the whole baking cookies equals to death from cooking to Harry and his crush!
Excellent. I cannot wait to see what happens when Draco wakes up!!
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well in all fairness you aren't exactly writing him as a ball of fluff. You are torturing him with all these problems, and it is having the opposite effect (as it should), making us want to cuddle him. lol I couldn't stop giggling at this chapter (still giggling). That's just too sweet how Draco wanted to cook something for Harry as a thank you (he should have probably stuck with a present that worked with his actual talents). I almost died when he said he wanted to make deviled eggs, and then proceeded to crack those eggs. Boiling them was just icing. Hermione catching Draco was amusing as well. Wonderful job.
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww.. update soon please! I have a tendency to forget about stories if they take too long to update.. and I dont want that to happen with this one!
person Milva
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story has only one defect - chapters are to short!
And the first scene and words "Draco woke up" - it's just brilliant. Although I suspected this is a dream from the very beginning :P

FC <3
person MeLaiya
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so loving this, please hurry and update soon, cant wait to see what happens next
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lmao. poor draco. im not sure i would want to eat something he cooked
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really well written, I'm enjoying it - it doesn't seem like Draco is likely to be the Top any time soon, but I don't really mind who is who. Great job and thanks for sharing this!
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww that was cute! I love it when Harry or Draco just can't cook... poor dears... Oh, well! At least it soothes my entirely non-existent cooking skills!
More soon please!
person Jilliane
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 3)

Sorry it's taken me so long to review!

A probationary wand....that's a good and original idea. Draco's comment made me laugh, although I'm sure you didn't intend it that way. It was just a very 'Draco' line. Maybe Ron and Hermione will be too busy arguing to notice what Harry is up to, and then poor Harry won't feel left out anymore, as he'll be too busy doing...ahem....update soon please!