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for Hollowed

by dirtydarella

person kalaway
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is such a lovely story! Please don't abandon it! Just a few more chapters, pretty please :D
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! I soooo need chapter 6!!! If only Draco knew!
person Milva
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, maybe they aren't short in general, but your writing is so catching that I reach end of each chapter so quickly I even don't know when :)

Oh, oh, when they finally kiss each other? *is impatient*
person Jilliane
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapters 4 & 5)

Sorry (again!) it's taken me so long to review! (*whimpers* RL is kicking my arse at the moment...) I love the humour of your stories. From Draco's attempts at "cooking" to try and get back in Harry's good graces, to what was, IMO, the best part of all, pounding on the wall and yelling at Hermione to practice what she preaches, I was snickering and laughing throughout. Hopefully, now that Ron and Hermione are sufficiently distracted with one another, and Harry is feeling left out, he and Draco can get to together and start making some of Draco's hot dreams come true....
person Anon
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the way Draco is in this story. I really hope you add more soon.
Sara
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so am i, so am i. i like how draco's becoming more comfortable around the others. sorta.
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Most of the torture, of course, is brought on Draco by his own actions of course. ^^ Although I found it completely endearing that Harry focused on that one line Draco whispered to him. It is probably the best thing for Harry to hear under the circumstances of the war [even if Draco had been in a naughtier rather than fluffy dream he was actually having]. I love that Draco gave Ron advice that led to later horrors. I really look forward to this "gift" that Draco gives to Harry. ^^ In whatever form it may be. Wonderful job. I love this story. Harry is too adorable too. That the best reaction to Draco's kiss, that Harry could come up with, was to push him was hilarious for me.
person Dezra
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O you make it sound like Draco is going to be a top. Too bad. Still, interesting story though.
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I thought I was going to wake everyone up from laughing so loud! First Draco admits to reading a romance novel, of all things, then he tries to cook! So freakin' funny. Yes, I see Harry is beginning to "notice" Malfoy now. Mmmmm....eagerly anticipating what is to come.
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 5!!!