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for The Dance

by Carmeleyes23

schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I agree, it makes no sense.
person sanda
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can not wait for the rest of it.

Great start to what seems like a great story!
person NightLo
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hum...so would you update this soon? I want to know what Avalon is...
person Pherazen
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story, but it stopped making sense after the second chapter.
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy moly!!! I sooo need chapter 7!!!