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for Melody

by soldiersgirl0709

person VoraciousReader
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I will learn to play piano I will learn to play piano I will learn to play piano...
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Firstly that is uber, uber hot!!!! lushness of a sort!!!


secondly

mwahahahahahahahah!!!!! i'm actually crying with laughter whilst my family looks at me like im something from space. :) actually amazing!!!


hahah
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I ran across this drawing and thought you might enjoy it. It meshes very well with this fic.

http://ellygator.deviantart.com/art/If-Music-Be-the-Food-of-Love-58995626

For transferring, this view of the same pic has the jpg ending:

http://fc32.deviantart.com/fs16/f/2007/184/5/9/If_Music_Be_the_Food_of_Love_by_Ellygator.jpg

LaBib
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hilarious! And hot, too. Yes, Lucius does demand a lot of attention, and I'm sure Severus will be frowning at him for pushing in like that (sorry for the bad pun, it was inadvertant) As always, too good.
person kazfeist
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done! :D
person Anon
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this one! Would you consider continuing it?
person mariteri
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome!
person dark_samira
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you're so sure this is just a opneshot? No steamy-hot sequel? I love yours Lucius/Hermione.
I love all your stories actually, but your Lucius/Hermione are just the cherry on top of the lot.
So, pretty please, write a sequel *_*
You know you want it
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am never going to catch up reading all your wonderful stories if you continue to bring them out at this rate (please don't stop though). I loved this especially the naughty little twist at the end when it turned out that she'd been turned on by the wrong 'instrument'. LMAO Loved it!
person Kristic
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First off, I'd like to start by saying that I am an avid reader of your Sev, Lucius, and Draco fictions with Hermione and that you rock complete and total face. I believe that this is the first time I've ever reviewed one of your stories . . . I know, I should be shaken and tickled with a large feather by a naked Lucius (okay, so my punishments need a little work).

As for this story . . . YOU ARE KILLING ME!!!! You're going to leave it there?!? Would it helped if I begged a bit for it to be extended? Probably not, but I had to ask. Excellent work as always! Look forward to the next creation!