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by TheLadyMiya

person Aimee
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
FRELLL OMG who found her mommy rose or yummy Voldy.....Oh I cant wait till the next chapter deary.
person marieve
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was SUCH an awesome chapter!! I have a essay due tomorrow but then i checked to see if you had updated the story and then i saw chapter 27 and i was like screw the essay im reading! lmao! LOVE the ending of the chapter, I love this pairing! You're story is absolutly enthralling!
person Extraho
schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you go girl!!!!! save your hubby!!!! Mione is certainly one tough as hell woman!!!
person Nicky111
schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I definitely like where this story is going! It is quickly becoming a favorite, especially now that Hermoine and Voldemort are acting more like a couple. I love it!
schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I am glad that Hermione and Voldemort were able to get the cup and to rescue Hermione's mother. I look forward to reading more.
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just finished chapter 8, and I thought I would share two things with you:

1) "With a quick move, he deposited his robe to the floor and crawled into bed. The werewolf smirked as Voldemort placed his arms around her body. She mumbled something again before she made herself comfortable in his arms. Voldemort smiled in triumph. The werewolf rolled his eyes before he closed them, sleep claiming him again.

Voldemort spent the rest of the night planning the other man
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for adding to this story xxx

It was worth the wait xx
person Avivafae
schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed reading this. I hope you update it soon.
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YOU KILLED HERMIONE'S DAD!?!?!?!?! How very rude of you.

I liked this chapter, and Im almost beginning to trust Voldemort...almost. Though, it's a little strange that Voldemort is trying to become Mr Popular, rather than Mr "I SHALL DISTROY YOU ALL" I think that it makes him that little bit more frightening, the way he is so cold, clinical and logical over how he is going to rule the world, in comparison to J.K. Voldemort, because it makes you wonder how he will be when he gets to the top. Will be a ruthless Stalin? Or perhaps the whole Wizarding World under one ruler (and maybe the muggle?) would be better for them because it would mean less friction between countries.

I like the way you have protraied Voldemort, he's Hitler in reverse. Rather than be diplomatic and fair first, and then a crazed megalomaniac after he has gained power, you have show morph from the crazy killer to an almost...pleasent leader.

As for Hermione, I like the way she is accepting her situation with grace, dealing with Voldemort in his own game, but on her terms. Most writers would turn Hermione into a weeper, depressed about her situation, but I personally feel that she is like Water, she is able to adapt to her situation better than most because her life has already been turned upside down with discovering her magical ability.

And finally Max...I want him! I think that if I was Miss Granger, I would jump him...though that would get him killed, so maybe not. But, I wonder why, though unaccepted by many of the DeathEaters, he is allowed to work for the twins. I thought to begin with that maybe he was undercover...but now i am not so sure. And he seems far to pleasent to be a DE. It would be nice to see a little more of him, because I am so interested in his character (Maybe a serperate story?)

I am definetly in love with this story, and i cannot wait to read more about it, and see where Hermione and Voldemort end up. And Im hoping that their son wont be too evil.