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by TheLadyMiya

schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh. Well all I have to say is Voldy so got what was coming to him. I mean, you mess with people long enough eventually you'll get results, they're just not always what you want them to be. Great update, I can't wait for more!!
person kitty08
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh god poor Hermione. yes i do think Voldemort made a terrible mistake, but I think he suffers with her and he deserves it. I love the idea that he has to cuddle his wife.. that is just soo funny.. :D Will Voldemort ever get jealous because of the relationship of Hermione and Lupin? i know it is more a brother sister relationship, but still, how will he cope?
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. It was sad that the Creavey family was killed because of Hermione, I hope that Remus can help her to overcome this. I look forward to reading more. I am curious as to whether or not Draco has gotten out of jail yet.
person n
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story..
very curious to see how this story will continue! :)
I think the storyline was brilliant in this chapter, especially your solution for the postcard! :D

please update soon
greetz n
person sjauthor
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well...Voldy wants to hurt her, but he can't. So he should be pleased someone did it for him! Hahaha.
Great chapter. Very entertaining!
person kitty08
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha i wonder what Voldemorts reaction will be when he hears that his wife is in jail. :D and he will have to pull the role of a loving husband on a honeymoon. cool i am looking forward to the next chapter!!!
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to reading more to see what happens to Draco and Hermione when Voldemort finds out they are at the police station. Also what will Lucius say about it.
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Her laugh changed into sobs. Suddenly, she felt dirty and used. He just played with her. He knew she wouldn
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh crap. I'm all nervous for her now. I know Voldemort can't hurt her, but he will punish her....I think. But Draco is in SO much trouble. I wonder how Lucius is going to get him out of this one. I can't wait for more!!
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful update. I actually really enjoy the dialog between Hermione and Voldemort. I can't wait for more!