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by TheLadyMiya

schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eh??? What?! She lost a finger? That's just cruel :o( I hope she didn't loose the baby...
He is behaving like an arrogant ass though. grrr. The meanie. Why can't he fall in love with her and feel his version of love for her? I think that would be sweet. It would make everything really sweet and lovely and all happy. You're right though, if he did love, he's probably lock her in a tower and put dragons outside to protect her from anyone but himself. LOL
So if he's just going to sorta be showing some more emotions...does that mean that he'll be in, his verion, of love with her? Oh I hope so! And then they could be the happy little Voldemort family.
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, I hope they didnt really have to pull off her finger...that would suck
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione. I hope that she and her unborn baby will be alright. I can't wait to read more too see what exactly happened to her. Did they have to remove her hand or just her finger. How will she cope now. Will Voldemort be furious with her for touching the book?
person sjauthor
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter; and I loved this part:

schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like...her getting info to severus was good
person sjauthor
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really hoping that you're not going to go with Lyra Aphrodite Moon's idea. That would be so out of character, that it would be...well, yuck.

I liked this chapter, though! Voldy being Voldy works for me. Voldy hopelessly head-over-heels in love doesn't. Although I do admit that he is human and therefore could potentially develop some feelings. But I have my limits, if it gets too soppy, I will quit reading.

But since you promised me he would not become all fluffy and lovely, I'm sure it'll be just fine.

"Nevertheless, what
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, very interesting. So are they venturing to Rome?
Eh, I wasn't a fan of this chapter, stupid Voldey was being well, stupid.
Are you really going to see him as heartless idiot for the whole thing?
I liked it better when he was showing some signs of emotion and actual feeling. LOL

Maybe you should have Hermione have a pregnancy scare, that would then scare stupid Voldemort and make him realize his romantic inner-self. This would be the part where he realizes he can't live without her, and he's absolutely bewildered, but in love with not only her, but he idea of having a child.

Yea, something cute and amazing like that! Yes, yes I vote for that!!!

But, tell more next time, about his Max Lestrange. He seems like an interesting character. Though, please tell me, he's not going to turn out to be some horrible villan?

Kk, update soon :o)

schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I am glad that Ginny will be able to return to her family, unless Voldemort changes his mind. I hope that Severus figures out what Hermione was telling him and finds the cup. Can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh. So Hermione's been threatened with death by Narcissa, gotten a new "pet", and is having prophetic dreams. All in all a great chapter! I can't wait for more. I hope you update again soon, I can't seem to be able to get enough of this story!
person kitty08
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god Ginny? wow a good idea :) and I love this chapter and there are a lot of funny parts you made me laugh a lot. so please update soon!!