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December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter 19
*::cackling::*
HA! Too funny, I love how Hermione got Tom in the "mommy/daddy button", and later he displayed jealousy/possessiveness regarding the touching of her breasts by his Death Eaters.
*::shakes head in disgust::*
Regarding his critique of the quality of her breast milk:
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*::cackling::*
HA! Too funny, I love how Hermione got Tom in the "mommy/daddy button", and later he displayed jealousy/possessiveness regarding the touching of her breasts by his Death Eaters.
*::shakes head in disgust::*
Regarding his critique of the quality of her breast milk:
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December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter 20
Hmm, I believe that I like the sexier version of this chapter here on AdultFanFiction(dot)Net much better than the watered down version on FanFiction(dot)Net... I believe that it is the dirty old lady in me.
*SNICKER* *SMIRK* *LEER* *WEG*
;~D
I'm looking forward to further installments for this story.
Well done--keep up the good work!
Hmm, I believe that I like the sexier version of this chapter here on AdultFanFiction(dot)Net much better than the watered down version on FanFiction(dot)Net... I believe that it is the dirty old lady in me.
*SNICKER* *SMIRK* *LEER* *WEG*
;~D
I'm looking forward to further installments for this story.
Well done--keep up the good work!
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December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh, I did like that chapter! It was very...sexy! Can't wait for the meeting with Dumbledore, either.
Sex after birth is different for each woman. Some can get back to it after just a few weeks, others take much longer. Depends on how much they bleed. And indeed, it's not exactly comfortable for a while at first. You're doing just fine with the way you've described that. The first time Hermione will get back to proper intercourse, it's most likely going to be painful. But a caring and loving husband can make a big difference as to how painful it will be (uh-oh...)! :D
Your friend and breast feeding...she must have had stimulation for those weeks (most likely via a breast pump).
Sex after birth is different for each woman. Some can get back to it after just a few weeks, others take much longer. Depends on how much they bleed. And indeed, it's not exactly comfortable for a while at first. You're doing just fine with the way you've described that. The first time Hermione will get back to proper intercourse, it's most likely going to be painful. But a caring and loving husband can make a big difference as to how painful it will be (uh-oh...)! :D
Your friend and breast feeding...she must have had stimulation for those weeks (most likely via a breast pump).
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December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, Voldemort is shameless. LOL
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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* I tried not to review this chapter, as I didn't like it. I was wondering if you preferred not getting a review, rather than a negative one? Personally though, I would want to get positive as well as negative reviews. But if you'd rather not I'll shut up next time.
I have never liked pregnancies and babies in fanfiction, and this is one reason why I don't like it. It annoys me when it's wrong. The whole breastfeeding thing here is wrong. It is not possible to produce milk 2 weeks after birth, when baby has been sucking on a bottle instead.
A woman's body adapts to her child. Dependent on how much baby sucks, the body will produce more or less milk. Sucking on a bottle instead of mom's nipple means no milk. None. That's a bodily reaction, which I cannot imagine being different for witches, as it just doesn't make sense to produce milk when nobody takes it.
This is also why women have milk for however long they (or baby) chose to breastfeed, be it 2 weeks or 10 years. There's a lot more to it, but I won't go into that.
I gave birth three times and have breastfed my children for a total of 15 years all together, therefore I don't much like to read about it, especially when it's wrong.
Maybe you could give me a warning when there are births or breastfeeding or "cute" kid moments coming up, so I can skip that? :)
Hehe...just kidding!
I think almost all husbands try what Voldie did, by the way. They're all curious.
I have never liked pregnancies and babies in fanfiction, and this is one reason why I don't like it. It annoys me when it's wrong. The whole breastfeeding thing here is wrong. It is not possible to produce milk 2 weeks after birth, when baby has been sucking on a bottle instead.
A woman's body adapts to her child. Dependent on how much baby sucks, the body will produce more or less milk. Sucking on a bottle instead of mom's nipple means no milk. None. That's a bodily reaction, which I cannot imagine being different for witches, as it just doesn't make sense to produce milk when nobody takes it.
This is also why women have milk for however long they (or baby) chose to breastfeed, be it 2 weeks or 10 years. There's a lot more to it, but I won't go into that.
I gave birth three times and have breastfed my children for a total of 15 years all together, therefore I don't much like to read about it, especially when it's wrong.
Maybe you could give me a warning when there are births or breastfeeding or "cute" kid moments coming up, so I can skip that? :)
Hehe...just kidding!
I think almost all husbands try what Voldie did, by the way. They're all curious.
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December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutly amazing!! The characters are evolving, the situations go from stressful to humourous, sometimes I feel like throwing my laptop out the window because Voldemort is SUCH an ASS!! but I absolutly love this story. There's never a dull moment and I really appreciate that. The more time that goes by the more Voldemort is taking care and giving affection to Hermione..I really hope he figures out that she's his match. I feel really bad for Harry though! What's going to happen to him?! And what's giong on with Lucius? Is he crushing on Mrs. Radcliffe (??) I think Snape and her are cute together though..but I get the feeling that she might just be using him for his potions skills..anyways I adore your story and I can't wait for you to update it!!
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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapters one through seventeen
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I love this story!
It has great passion, character development, humor, thrills (exciting bits), and other emotional triggering moments too.
Well done--keep up the good work!
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I love this story!
It has great passion, character development, humor, thrills (exciting bits), and other emotional triggering moments too.
Well done--keep up the good work!
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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter eighteen
YES! He is worried about her, which hopefully means that he is starting to have feelings for her too.
Great story--keep up the good work!
I'm looking forward to further installments.
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YES! He is worried about her, which hopefully means that he is starting to have feelings for her too.
Great story--keep up the good work!
I'm looking forward to further installments.
:D