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January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! I'm glad you updated!
Heheh, I've always found wizards watching TV for the first time to be very amusing.
The goblet of gods. A very cool sounding name for it! It makes sense that there would be two of them. Everything needs a balance. Who could have had the power and magic to make such a pair of cups, and how were they created. They seem something akin to the philosopher's stone. They're probably as rare and saught out as the stone too. The idea of such artifacts having a consciusness is an interesting one. Maybe by the end of the story, we'll know their intended purpose, and whether any of Voldemort and Hermione's theories are grounded in fact.
What a jerk! Making Hermione steal information from Dumbledore like that. If anyone were to find out somehow, that would only add to the rumors that she's changed sides. I'm sure he wouldn't mind that. Why is he sending her and not someone else? And whether she likes it or not, he might end up telling that poor child he was an accident. I really wish I knew what kind of boy those two will turn out.
See? I knew she'd want to go! No need to drag the girl where learning can be found, only hold her in place to keep her from running toward the place at full speed. Why did the villagers move? Is it something they do after a certain amount of time, or is it so they would incur no danger from the Riddles? The fire and dancing might have been meant to distract Hermione and Voldemort from the villagers' departure.
*laughs* Has anyone been stupid enough to try poisoning Lord Voldemort? I would guess not, or he'd of mentioned it. I feel sorry for anyone who does try!
That fire, it's sure something. What exactly is the purpose of the dance, and why does it change the fire's color? Does it have something to do with magic being put into the fire through the dancing? I saw something like that in a Tamora Pierce book. (Emmalon universe, not Tortal.) Or maybe it's the soup, or a combo of the soup and the dance? It be funny if she got pregnant from such a ritual.-Though I've gathered from Voldemort's thought that he wouldn't allow another child to be born.
Love the smut! You're wonderful at writing it. I hope the others weren't watching, that's so wrong!
Being able to read Voldemort's thoughts with a single touch is awesome! She might not like everything she hears, though. Is that what he dreams of, Hermione a lunatic with a cut throat?
It will be quite an experience to know what he's thinking while they're in bed, if he's thinking at all. At least he can't read hers...that we know about! I think he'd show at least a minor reaction if he could. She better keep this little advantage to herself. A nice gift, that. And a little control over the ability would be good, if that's possible. Maybe it wears off? Life could get complicated like this. The milk thing is cute, though! What does she mean by strange?
...The rest of the month? Was she able to stay away because she had intentions of coming back? Why didn't it affect him? You'd think it would make him feel pain till he tried to get her back, kind of like when she was pregnant and in pain.
Very awesome chapter!
Heheh, I've always found wizards watching TV for the first time to be very amusing.
The goblet of gods. A very cool sounding name for it! It makes sense that there would be two of them. Everything needs a balance. Who could have had the power and magic to make such a pair of cups, and how were they created. They seem something akin to the philosopher's stone. They're probably as rare and saught out as the stone too. The idea of such artifacts having a consciusness is an interesting one. Maybe by the end of the story, we'll know their intended purpose, and whether any of Voldemort and Hermione's theories are grounded in fact.
What a jerk! Making Hermione steal information from Dumbledore like that. If anyone were to find out somehow, that would only add to the rumors that she's changed sides. I'm sure he wouldn't mind that. Why is he sending her and not someone else? And whether she likes it or not, he might end up telling that poor child he was an accident. I really wish I knew what kind of boy those two will turn out.
See? I knew she'd want to go! No need to drag the girl where learning can be found, only hold her in place to keep her from running toward the place at full speed. Why did the villagers move? Is it something they do after a certain amount of time, or is it so they would incur no danger from the Riddles? The fire and dancing might have been meant to distract Hermione and Voldemort from the villagers' departure.
*laughs* Has anyone been stupid enough to try poisoning Lord Voldemort? I would guess not, or he'd of mentioned it. I feel sorry for anyone who does try!
That fire, it's sure something. What exactly is the purpose of the dance, and why does it change the fire's color? Does it have something to do with magic being put into the fire through the dancing? I saw something like that in a Tamora Pierce book. (Emmalon universe, not Tortal.) Or maybe it's the soup, or a combo of the soup and the dance? It be funny if she got pregnant from such a ritual.-Though I've gathered from Voldemort's thought that he wouldn't allow another child to be born.
Love the smut! You're wonderful at writing it. I hope the others weren't watching, that's so wrong!
Being able to read Voldemort's thoughts with a single touch is awesome! She might not like everything she hears, though. Is that what he dreams of, Hermione a lunatic with a cut throat?
It will be quite an experience to know what he's thinking while they're in bed, if he's thinking at all. At least he can't read hers...that we know about! I think he'd show at least a minor reaction if he could. She better keep this little advantage to herself. A nice gift, that. And a little control over the ability would be good, if that's possible. Maybe it wears off? Life could get complicated like this. The milk thing is cute, though! What does she mean by strange?
...The rest of the month? Was she able to stay away because she had intentions of coming back? Why didn't it affect him? You'd think it would make him feel pain till he tried to get her back, kind of like when she was pregnant and in pain.
Very awesome chapter!
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January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hermione sure got out of that one! I'd hate to think she would have given away Snape's secret...
The story of the cups is getting more and more interesting.
You said it's almost done. How many more updates, do you think?
The story of the cups is getting more and more interesting.
You said it's almost done. How many more updates, do you think?
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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this! Update soon!! =)
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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I'm happy Harry is finally free. I hope he'll get over his suicidal tendencies, though!
Interesting what's happened/happening to Hermione's parents. I'm wondering if they are still alive, after all.
The contract...ohhhhh! Hermione better not find out. Unlike Voldemort, I'm sure she'll take the opportunity to get out of it in a heartbeat.
Interesting what's happened/happening to Hermione's parents. I'm wondering if they are still alive, after all.
The contract...ohhhhh! Hermione better not find out. Unlike Voldemort, I'm sure she'll take the opportunity to get out of it in a heartbeat.
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January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm taking a chance that i am your 100th reveiw, I am realy likeing this wierd ship, although they are a bit different, they show the same challenges each couple face. I like how he shows his softer side, not to soft, but to him it is. thank you for writing this.
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January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this fic. Once I started, I couldn't stop. However, I do have a question. What are the two ways that Dumbledore has tried to kill Voldemort through Hermione? The necklace, maybe, and the contract? I wonder if he expected her to live after she killed him, or if she was a necessary sacrifice.
Anyway, I love this story. I'm going to be keeping up with it on ff.net, though I'll read it here so I won't miss the best bits. :D
Anyway, I love this story. I'm going to be keeping up with it on ff.net, though I'll read it here so I won't miss the best bits. :D
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January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to reading more.
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January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I cam across this fanfic and I LOVE your stories. I like how you portray Voldemort in the fic. I stayed up till 3am reading all the chapters!
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January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY, the baby has a name! LOL
hmmm, I think this chapter has growth. Voldey and Hermione are growing into a real couple, having real conversations -- he must hate it. But that's a good thing. I like the status of their relationship after this chapter.
Well, I hope their coming to an agreement, eventually turns out to be a relationship of complete awe within the other person, if not love -- as you said Voldey can't love :)
hmmm, I think this chapter has growth. Voldey and Hermione are growing into a real couple, having real conversations -- he must hate it. But that's a good thing. I like the status of their relationship after this chapter.
Well, I hope their coming to an agreement, eventually turns out to be a relationship of complete awe within the other person, if not love -- as you said Voldey can't love :)