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It was a lovely day at work and thank you. Again I'm so exited. I was curious how you would make Narcissa side with Harry like she did at the end in "Bloody but Unbowed", and the way you showed her thoughts was fabulous when she seemed so eager to get revenge for the headache curse and how she decided against it for Harry. Thanks for the new chapter again so soon. It was fabulous
Sara

Awwwww!!!

So this is love..mmmhmmm mmmmmhmmm... so this is loooooove... so thiiiiis is what makes life divine.....

awww! draco's in love!

Sooo need chapter 20!!!

Great chapter! I love your Narcissa, of course. I like how she choose to disguise herself, the little things you added to cover the glamour and the make her dress in such a way that people would create stories about her [her hair color] instead of thinking about how they recognized her. Was the mirror enchanted, or just position in a way that "reflects his body in astounding proportions"? I never really thought much on it before in the previous story. I loved that one line that Rogers said though, very poignant: "He treats his body as if it were a mere machine for the bearing of his soul.

Soooo need chapter 20!!!

Thanks for updating again and always it was a pleasure to read I'd write more but your story distracted me so much im late for work see yea
Sara

Great ending to that chapter. Lucius already plotting even before he is cured.

*snicker* i like narcissa. she's fun

Although it was mostly the same lines from Bloody, I really enjoyed this one as there were a couple things I hadn't thought of or expected.

First of all, I was a bit disappointed [though I shouldn't have been] that Draco already knew about the Headache curse. Of course "we" entered that room "with" Harry in Bloody and all of the Malfoys were already in the room, but I hadn't thought they discussed the headache curse among themselves. To find that Draco's look of pain, which Harry noted as real and true in his eyes, was fake was surprising. When I learned that they had known, it was the first time I disagreed that this is the type of family Harry needs [as Narcissa keeps pointing out that it is]. And while I knew that Narcissa was frustrated and angry at herself for not noticing the curse, I certainly hadn't expected Draco to be angry with her for not noticing it [although he might have been angry at himself, as he knew Harry had headaches].

Also, I really liked reading the conversation between Lucius and Harry. Appropriately, I felt really bad for Draco. It is sad that Draco had to remind Lucius about his profession and to almost beg for letters [even though Harry's purpose for Lucius' help is more pressing]. Did you intend for Lucius' to not hesitate when Harry asked him of the favor and smiled at Harry to truly be acting on Lucius' part? Or is that just what Draco's telling himself?

So many little things about Harry and Draco's later conversation as enjoyable as well. Although Harry's question was abrupt, because Harry hadn't noticed any sort of pained reaction on Draco's part, it was sad to read [and understandable] that Draco was hurt to be asked that after the kiss. At that point, in Harry's pov I had laughed since Harry had sat there wondering how Draco was able to flirt with him on the subject.

Enjoyable chapter. :)