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for For Their Unconquerable Souls

by Lomonaaeren

schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this so much! And two parts of Narcissa's POV! ^^ This made me so happy.

It was really cool to see how Harry's words affected them, even things as simple as Narcissa lowering her voice, but unknown to him--because she didn't want her voice to waver if she raised it. While they were both aware of what their reactions would do to Harry, they were honest. This is such a fabulous scene.

I'm not sure if I mentioned it before but I'm really glad Narcissa wishes to, but won't take revenge on either Emptyweed or the Dursleys. Whether it is this experience in this scene or Narcissa's instructions that hopefully stop Draco's actions against the Dursleys, it is so heartening to see Harry's effect on them as well. Reading Harry's POV somewhat downplayed the way he affected them, since they do not express themselves so openly from the start of this story. Awesome chapter.
person Sara
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH I loved this chapter. Especially Narcissa again. I cannot get over your version of her. I'll probably never be able to think of her as another way again. Thanks for updating.
Your fan,
Sara
p.s. update again sooon please ^_^
person Michelle Wolf
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
touche. marvelous chapter! Narcissa and Draco did very well in the gentle persuasion. i'm ready for more, please!?
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
at least draco and narcissa are beginning to understand.
person Kross
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the most fantastic stories that I have had the pleasure of reading. I wish that all of the writers in the world had half a measure of the skill that you possess. Thank you for gracing this site and me with your story. I do hope that you will continue writing. Good Luck.
Kross
person Yume111
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
uh oh! poor harry's in trouble. lol. he kinda deserves it though.
person Katrina
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry that I haven't been reviewing every chapter, but I have been reading along with every one and I can honestly say that this story has blown me away! I've also read 'Bloodied But Unbowed' of course and thoroughly enjoyed it as well. You've done a stupendous job of re-telling the story through the Malfoys perspective, and it's been an addicting read for me and others I would assume.

Personally, I adore the way you've portrayed Narcissa as both caring and calculating. I'm extremely eager to see how the next chapter is going to unfold. It's going to be brilliant in any case.

Your story is the first one I look for when checking for updates, and I can't thank you enough for updating on a consistent basis. Here's to more lovely Malfoy charms!
person Michelle Wolf
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
its really terrific! i want to read more! Draco is an idiot but i imagine that it is pretty hard for him to change his way of thinking for Harry. Harry really seems to be self-destructive.
person Sara
schedule December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! a new chapter!~ I loved seeing how much Draco cared about Harry. Thanks for writing again so soon, I loved it again. Your my absolute favorite author!
Sara