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for For Their Unconquerable Souls

by Lomonaaeren

schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol. bout time someone told lucius off. i would LOVE to see him like that jaw hanging open in shock.
person Sara
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved your new chapter as always. It was great to see more of Lucius's point of view at the end there, and I loved how Draco is deciding to not change completely for Harry. Thanks for updating so quickly.
Sara
person Michelle Wolf
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was very convincing and touching. i liked it very much. if Draco continues this way then i am sure he will get Harry's trust,though you are the author so really you are the only one that can determine that. i liked all the honesty stuff that Draco said, very heart warming. will Harry remember that kind of one sided conversation?
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 25!!! The interaction between the two men just blow me away! And Narcissa! Wow!
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
draco's sweet. a little overconfident sometimes but still.
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story, thanks for sharing!
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hadn't noticed before, I think, that Roger called Malfoy Manor "Roger's House." He is such a wonderful elf. ^^ Narcissa directing some of Draco's frustration about Harry unto herself was wonderfully played. Overall a very sweet chapter. Seeing Draco's perspective as he calmed down from his terror (and even found about about the breath stealing charm) was sweet to see, as things like Harry's leaning on him or asking for help helped to quell Draco's frustration, as well as allow him to be useful and not useless.
person SAra
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Always a pleasure to review. I loved your chapter as always, it was delightful. ^_^ thanks for writing
Sara
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 24!!!
person Ellie
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

That was out loud.

I love the way you write! I think that the interactions between the Malfoy family are exquisitely written, and the little things they notice make them seem like they're not even human - or just humans from a different day and age.

Wonderful!