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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow! you left it at a real cliff hanger! that is cruel! *pouting* update fast so i can get some relief. Draco and Harry are starting to have some good insights about each other. well done! the next chapter sounds like its going to be messy.
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh crap poor lucius. that just kinda sucks. a lot. but oh for harry and draco. what i would give to be a fly on the wall
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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
poor Drakey, what to do? i love that Harry calls Lucius an idiot to his face, it was priceless! the complexities of it all are so fascinating and make you think really hard. Draco has my sympathy for trying to figure out the best ways to say things, but it seems that he enjoys it as well.
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this was really such a fantastic chapter. I'm not sure how hard it was for your to argue from Draco's point of view, but this was really excellent. I had forgotten that Harry, in the first part of this discussion, was in part really overwhelmed by the Malfoy family. So while the way Draco acted was appropriate to the ending of Harry's near "hyperventilation," I couldn't help but think that everything Draco wasn't saying actually made sense, when the words he had said did not. Especially the first, when he thought "Not fair...." Though I did enjoy better this time his words about native speakers vs. learners.
It was funny, the minor contradictions I still saw, only because I stand firmly in Harry's camp for equal thought to all. Such as the heroes topic that was brought up twice, the first when Draco thought about the heroes (pureblood) that fought for the wizarding culture, and then when he gets angry at Emptyweed, who also upholds heroes who understand politics (and culture since wizarding politics is probably very conservative).
But this chapter was really charming and telling. Honestly, some of the words masked through Malfoy-lips, once I hear their side, are the disadvantageous ones to say. This is true for the beginning when Draco was such a darn pervert. lol I loved hearing his thoughts that led up to Draco's headache curse as you introduced the thought really early in the chapter (And you must realize what a tempting target for vengeance he would make if he were here.). Seriously, this story is much more than I thought it might be, reading the same story twice. Perspective is everything I suppose. But for some reason, Draco seems to fall harder than Harry does in some ways, because Harry does it honestly (maybe). Every little thing in this chapter, from Harry telling Draco the little bit on the Dursleys, swallowing the potion whole, and the ways it affects Draco; it is so much fun to read. I could love the story probably from Narcissa's point of view alone. But I'm in love with this story because of Draco's. Amazing chapter.
It was funny, the minor contradictions I still saw, only because I stand firmly in Harry's camp for equal thought to all. Such as the heroes topic that was brought up twice, the first when Draco thought about the heroes (pureblood) that fought for the wizarding culture, and then when he gets angry at Emptyweed, who also upholds heroes who understand politics (and culture since wizarding politics is probably very conservative).
But this chapter was really charming and telling. Honestly, some of the words masked through Malfoy-lips, once I hear their side, are the disadvantageous ones to say. This is true for the beginning when Draco was such a darn pervert. lol I loved hearing his thoughts that led up to Draco's headache curse as you introduced the thought really early in the chapter (And you must realize what a tempting target for vengeance he would make if he were here.). Seriously, this story is much more than I thought it might be, reading the same story twice. Perspective is everything I suppose. But for some reason, Draco seems to fall harder than Harry does in some ways, because Harry does it honestly (maybe). Every little thing in this chapter, from Harry telling Draco the little bit on the Dursleys, swallowing the potion whole, and the ways it affects Draco; it is so much fun to read. I could love the story probably from Narcissa's point of view alone. But I'm in love with this story because of Draco's. Amazing chapter.
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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I do LOVE every time you update. I feel giddy and joyous just seeing the story. I loved to see from Draco's point of view this chapter because he thought so differently. Its amazing to see two points of view collide the way they do.
Thanks for updateing!~
Sara
Thanks for updateing!~
Sara
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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow. i think if draco had purred around me i would have had one of those instant orgasms. lol. i love that they are getting along better and starting to get closer
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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 27!!!
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January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 26!!! Narcissa is telling Draco to back off some and Harry just laid everything out for Lucius. Soooo need more!!!
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January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy that Draco jumped out of bed, only to go running to Narcissa happily. Narcissa's section was amazing; you are the reason I love her character. ^^ (When she called him
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January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Drat!Might i also say "Ouch!" for Lucius. that kind of stung alittle. it was very well deserved though. i like all of this psychology stuff, it really makes you think about it.