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i'm glad they were able to stop it. Harry really has a cool head for this kind of thing. i also love it how he is changing the Malfoy thinking pattern. Narcissa thinking of justice instead of revenge and realizing that Harry wouldn't approve of her cursing others. its kind of sweet in a wierd way.

ok so the moment with harry/draco/narcissa standing there just made me go awwwwwwwwwwww! i like that narcissa is starting to change a little for harry

Wow. I have to say I'm impressed with the depth and planning that went into this story. Plots within plots and exploring the Pureblood ideals through Malfoy eyes. Very interesting. Excellent diologue, both external and internal. Well written, it flows well with good grammer. Excellently done. I look forward to more.

Oh goodness. I really do love that last line. Seeing Narcissa actually completely stop her actions (instead of just her thoughts) because of her connection with Harry is just wonderful. And it wasn't to farfetched for Draco, in the previous chapter, to worry for a moment that Harry would fall for the controlled and beautiful Narcissa, but I found it endlessly amusing that he thought it. It was really cool to read Draco eavesdropping on their conversation, even seeing Narcissa not be completely honest with Harry and thinking on it, as well as nearly laughing at Lucius for telling Narcissa what to do. Did you always intend Draco's time to "think" as "wank" in Bloody as well? That was funny too as an inside disturbing joke being put sidealong to Narcissa's own pun on Emptyweek in the last chapter. I also really liked the line of Draco's exasperation, bowing his head, when Harry apologizes for using the Malfoy Blood Magic. The subsequent bed scene was sweet, and I'm not sure if I noticed the irony of the situation in Bloody, but it was a bit ironic for Harry to tell Draco HE should rest. I really like that turnabout there just because it really describes how all of this is affecting Draco (Narcissa as well). Narcissa's glamour into a Death Eater persona of a certain sort, was really amazingly described in my opinion. I loved the Scimitar smile/mouth. Wonderful job with these past two chapters. It figures that just as I catch up finally, you've posted Inter Vivos. lol You are too amazing.

Your Narcissa is what makes this story work so well.

Soooo need chapter 29!!!

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Please!
Update!

Nooooo a cliff hanger! How could you possibly end it here! Damn now I'm going to be impatiently waiting for the next chapter to come out lol.

Soooo need chapter 28!!!

It's been a while since I read this from Harry's side, but I just seemed that from how Draco's view of things that Harry is 'giving in', when really if I remember correctly Harry was only admitting his feelings and attraction. It also became clear to me that the Malfoys have a weakness that they think is a strength, they think too much into actions and reactions. It's amusing reading what they think Harry's motives or reactions mean, when while Harry has changed for the better, he is still himself. Also I feel sorry that they expect Harry to change to suit them, sure they have their reasons, but besides being 'honest' and accepting of Harry's friends, they don't give in for much else. Basically from my rambling I'm saying they read into things way to much when they forget the smallest reasons. But I'm glad the Draco is being more honest with his reactions and actions with Harry.