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Draco is just selectively listening. Goodness. Harry said specifically in this chapter how he would not want revenge to be taken for him in any case (so far at least). On another note, though the last chapter of Bloody was considerably longer, it it funny that Draco's chapter of their first time would take up an entire chapter, as if the Draco made it that way (if that makes sense). I enjoyed reading Draco's perspective when he told Harry to undress, and even when Harry continually teased him. It was startling for me too the number of time Harry mentioned Xavier back in Bloody, so it was funny to see Draco's perspective. I love knowing that Draco playfully whacked Harry after worrying Draco over Harry's mental state. Lovely chapter.

Sooo need chapter 31!!!

lmao. poor draco and lucius didn't know what they were in for with harry. at least narcissa did though. lol

Oh I'm loving this story. I have an absolute personal abhorrence of vengeance, but your skill at describing the Malfoy's point of view has me as bloodthirsty as they are by the end of the 30th chapter!! I totally want Lucius to get his way.

So great.

And the addition of Draco and Lucius' discovery of Harry's abuse and neglect by the Dursleys keeps the story even more interesting. Kudos.

:D I really love how the upperhand is passed around here, especially for Draco and Lucius who believe themselves to always have it (for the most part). I do wonder how far that deal reaches, and whether or not it only covers Lucius' attackers and not the Dursleys as well. I had forgotten that it was only in this chapter that Harry addresses his dislike for vengence directly, and I really love his argument about the other laws taking precedence over this 14th law. Although, written from their perspective, it is sad that Narcissa seems to be almost a betrayer of her husband for not siding with Draco on the revenge issue, I'm glad that at the end she does directly mention that she never liked "drawn-out revenge" though she did see the need for it. Great chapter.

yeah, i know. i just like subtle revenge. good manuvearing on Harry's part. took Draco a while to figure out he wasn't going to win against Harry though. do we finally get that sex scene with Draco and Harry next?

Soooo need chapter 30!!!

yes, Harry reminds me of one of my cats. she's always clueless. atleast Narcissa understands this. Draco's revenge sounds horrible but i believe it to be justified. mirror mazes on the offending death eaters would be a good revenge but i doubt that the Malfoys would do that.

yay snarky man is back! lol. because just two snarky people isn't enough for harry to deal with he must have three! i have no idea what im saying here but im glad lucius is cured and i can't wait for another!

This was a beautiful chapter. I really enjoyed Narcissa's small portion, looking on Lucius and almost touching him, warring within herself on what she should do. I thought that that was just a gorgeous scene. And of course, reading as Draco looked at Harry while Harry cured Lucius, that was so wonderful. I still look forward to what decisions Draco's love for Harry will bring Draco to act upon, whether he'll love Harry enough not to make those hunger potions or whether he'll love him enough to want justice.

As for your comment that Draco would be more concerned if he saw how Narcissa was being affected, as he almost caught onto something with that letter, I found that interesting. But I really like the line in this chapter about how she felt like Harry influenced her heart, just as Draco does as shown through her actions in the war. If only Draco could caught the RIGHT whiff of her emotions on this, maybe he'd understand what he could potentially lose by acting on those things he was thinking so dreamily about in this chapter.