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*happy sigh*

You know I love you, right? I want to hug you and do dirty inappropriate things to you and tie you to your computer until you finish writing... which may actually interfere with the writing process. *ponders* Ah well. The thought is still there.

Just finished "Bloody But Unbowed" and it was masterful. I loved every nuance of it. Started this one, and am delighted with the inner working of the Malfoy mind and heeart. You are doing a sensational job! Your Harry is adorable and clueless and needy and vulnerable and strong... Draco is the same... you have turned me into a run-on sentence kind of girl to try and articulate how much I love your character development!

*blows kisses*
Roo

Oh wow! I soooo need chapter 7!!! What a difference of opinion make!

I love reading this story from the Malfoys side. I eagerly await each update! You writing style is fantastic and it shows that you put a lot of work into your stories. Thank you for being able to make regular updates, I appreciate all the effort that you put into your work for our enjoyment.

Chapter 5: I'm so excited! I've been dying to hear Draco/Lucius POV on the Heart

This is so so so so so good! I am hooked! I love how you're delving into the relationship between the malfoy family members, I love how Draco's "seduction" is changing the more Harry is revealed to him, I love... it all! Can't wait for the next update! Could you possibly email me when you do? Katmai_2008@hotmail.com Thanks

i really like this story. I love harry as a medwizard super cool. Can't wait to see more you evil cliff hanger author you!

Sooo need chapter 6!!!

Yes, well. That's why I love this couple so much. Separately they are so entertaining (as that is also what they think of each other), and together...very amusing. That was definitely my favorite scene in Bloody But Unbowed. I like how it was approached here as well. I suppose I can assume the scene will finish with Lucius. I had completely forgotten Xavier's plot to heroize Harry. lol I like how it was posted here as a clean laundry list of lovers. Before, I just kept thinking "another one?!" when Harry would mention a new name. I like that even though Draco is gaining tips from others how to make Harry happy, he is also, for example, appreciating Harry's qualities as a Healer. It makes it less like Draco is acting, and truly describes him as desiring Harry. I'm also glad that whereas Harry thought that Draco was just seeking to "thank Harry" with sex, it is confirmed here that Draco had just confirmed his desires for Harry as an equal, and it was less thankful admiration, but rather more...lustful? Especially important since it isn't just physical, and he actually wants Harry, rather unlike Harry's other lovers. Nice job also bringing in Draco's later criticisms of Draco's doubt that Harry can succeed in curing Lucius if he is distracted by another patient, or more importantly by his own lack of health. As far as what you said about Draco not understanding perhaps Harry's total strength/weakness, I'm a bit wary about the involvement of Roger to be honest. Surely Draco would be annoyed at the moment of appointing Roger (I'm not sure he'd be stricken with the same non-thinking helpfulness that Harry exudes with the Heart's Blessing), and that he might even think that Harry isn't strong enought to take care of himself and needs constant coddling. In any case, wonderful job. I really look forward to part II of this scene.

i like how draco is always changing his mind but he's kind of really an ass sometimes huh

I love Bloody but unbowed and I LOVE this story too! Thankyou for writing Draco's perspective!

Cheers,
Lauren