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So so sooooo need chapter 10!!!

looks like draco is finally learning.

It is amusing to see Draco take the extreme side of healing (healing the person + renvenge) while Harry had taken the extreme side of negative self-healing (not caring enough for himself + giving more than he has to others). I look forward to this next chapter, as I hadn't really enjoyed reading Draco's comment even before about how Harry will learn to appreciate Draco, once he gets hurt. It sounded to much like a Parent who would tell their child to do whatever, for the sake of waiting for them to crawl back and beg forgiveness. Although I'm sure this next event will just secure's Draco's own mind to keep a tight motherly control over Harry's actions, it did help set the medium need of what Harry should have. Especially with Harry having so surely denied that need. These two really do create such an extraordinary, middleground, invisible character, in some respects. Wonderful job.

BTW, just adding this on to my post: That "Never-Ending Orgasm Spell" sentence had me lingering. lol Ashamedly I think I totally stood stock-still after reading that for at least a minute or so. Brain overload.

about #8...

I've FINALLY caught up with my stories, it's amazing what you can miss when you
don't have lights for 2 1/2 weeks [sounds like a movie].

I'm surprised by all the freakin' stories that cropped up out of nowhere.

NOW, about the story, the thing that gets me is in the original version from Harry's
POV...Draco came across as sorta spoiled and, should I say, flighty. Is that how Harry
saw him?

Because, from Draco's POV, he displays true Slytherin qualities from the heart, with
his smugness and arrogance and sees Harry as the one with half a brain, in the
beginning.

I guess it's all about misconceptions?

By the way, I wanted to ask you something but forgot what it was.

aaaaah.. another exciting chapter. I can't wait, I can't wait.. I feel like I should pounce around or something..
Maybe I'll jsut go to bed and dream that there will be an update soon.

aaahhhhh.....you cant end it there...well you did.
Poooie on me.
I will have to come back and read more.
And I will, wonderfully written and cant wait for the next chapter to be released.

Soo soooo sooooo need chapter 9!!!

That was amusing. Most especially when Draco thought Ron was playing...a game. Jeez. Draco's descriptions and relief in Hermione was interesting and amusing. I liked the added scenes you wrote at the beginning and last bit of the chapter as well. Although Draco later rescinded his kind thoughts of Ron, it was good to see Draco not being a hypocrite and also trying to accomodate for the change that people underwent post-war. Nicely done.

This was a great story the first time around, and it just improves from Draco's point of view.

Damn this is a good story. You got me hooked now :S