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Thanks for telling me that, I'll let you know if I figured it out.
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about #11...

Not much to say on this one, it felt more like a
''Getting-to-know-you-while-getting-a-''feel''-for-you'' chapter to see where the
other stood or I should, Narcissa needed a way to see how to proceed with Harry,
while trying to make him feel comfortable and not trapped.

:) Narcissa is too cool. I hadn't thought of her dress before as something connected to the Heart's Blessing Spell, I would have guessed it was for a Griffindor welcoming or something. Her conversation with Rogers was fun to see, as well as her anecdote about Draco's childhood. It was really endearing to read Narcissa begin to fall for Harry's humbleness at the end of this chapter. Wonderful job.

it makes sense and i like how narcissa is shaping up as a character. i think harry needs someone like her to help him understand him.

Your view of Narcissa is faultless: she's sophisticated, faceted, and perceptive to everything and everyone around her. I love her and am terrified of her. Narcissa unerringly controls every aspect of her world.
Wonderful.

I know what I wanted to ask you last time, I don't know if only authors are allowed to
do this. But, in the Author Profile, I noticed that you can do something called
Recommended Reading and do a list of stories that are favorites or...recommended.

But, I haven't figured out HOW to do it, I thought maybe there was a button you
clicked on, but so far I haven't seen anything of the sort.

Any clues?

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about # 10...

Sooo...when is Harry going to get a clue & have the Heart's Blessing explained
to him??? I don't recall it taking this long in the other story.

...and I'm surprised you haven't done a Halloween one-shot. Lord knows your famous
for creeping the crap out folks. :-)

Sooo need chapter 11!! All three Malfoys have something to learn about Harry!

man draco and his father need to learn a lot from narcissa. i feel kinda bad for her.lol

Narcissa's was a refreshing point of view. Draco continues to be amazed at Harry's "ignorance," and it is completely understandable for Harry to feel frustrated when Draco acts as if he is talking to a child, rather than describing something that is of importance to Draco. So that she understands this without seeming like she is disgusted of Harry's misunderstanding of the situation, is really cool to see. Of course, her attitude towards Harry's appearance was less refreshing...lol. By the way I totally just realized I got the timeline wrong when I last reviewed. I had thought that Harry was to meet some resistance and attack at St. Mungos after leaving Grimmauld. Which happens WAY later in the story. Oops. In any case, wonderful job.

IT'A SO FUN READING THIS I REALLY REALLY LIKES NARSISSA'S VIEW POINT.
SORRY ABOUT THE CAPS

about #9...

Good LORD!!!! Forget Draco doing this, hell, I want to take a stick and beat Harry
myself!!! That's stubborness to the nth degree! O_o