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i love how this shows more of harry and draco's connection thanks to the spell than it did through harry's point of view or maybe its just because its been a lil while since i read the other one. anyway i loved it

good chapter.

"for always," huh? Daaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... ^.^

I think from the Malfoy's perspective, the same words I read in Harry's POV, seem to have so much more bite to them. I know that is to be expected as I feel sypathy to the narrator in the foreground. But I love the exchanges between Lucius and Harry. They aren't friendly but openly and tastefully insulting. ["But I haven

Please update again as soon as you can. This story and its counterpart story are my favorites out of all the ones you've written. I've taken the time to read them all and damn it took a long time. Worth every bit though. I love everything you've written and I thank you for writting it too. I LOVE DRACO AND HARRY!~
Your adoring fan
Sara

Sooo need chapter 14!!!

*embarassed* Yeah. I know that everything here is part of a story we've already read up to the end. But next to talking of the different aspects from the other, story, I suppose I am trying to review and approach this partially as if I hadn't read the other. Or maybe that's just an excuse to not remember. And trying to make a connection with the hopeful character growth of your Dracos. ^^ I noticed you didn't say things were looking up for Hephaestus' Draco. With only 11 chapters that's a bit worrisome. Especially since he stooped so low in that one as to call Harry a monster (although he didn't complete the comment) Btw, I'm not sure how LiveJournal works but if you see a random name called: "callistianstar"...that's me. My name was taken. So yeah, you can just ignore it. It'll help me updating-alert wise.

Great chapter. I know he is definitely in character, but I found it a bit sad/amusing how Draco calculated everything from the compliments, while his eyes were downcast. But I really liked the transition at the end when Draco called it letting his barriers down a bit. Both gaining a comfort zone is awesome with Harry trying to gain comfort in luxuries, and Draco in simplicities (in a way). Another thing I liked were Draco's spot on deductions of what Harry was actually thinking. I didn't see a moment where he misjudge Harry, except for perhaps about the scene in the books when the gang showed up at Malfoy manner. But somehow that slip was far less horrible than the constant belitting of Harry or the constant attack of outlandish flirtiness. Wonderful job.

Good chapter.

good chapter.

another dazzling chapter
I simply adore your writing style and I'm very happy you decided to continue this story on the Malfloy's point of view.
thanks for the amazing story so far ^_^