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August 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving the story from the Malfoy POV!
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July 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like the story from this angle better
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November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this, and it's partner story, have got to be one of the most interestng things i've read in a long time.
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed both your stories immensely. It was a wonderful treat to find such wonderful depth of character and sheer thoughtfulness as the many threads came together. Thank you very much for sharing! I do look forward to any further works you may decide to post.
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
messy and satisfying. this is a happy girl over here! i loved the compition element in this scene!
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very well done! touching ending. Draco does know how to except defeat, amazing. took him a long time to figure out that you can't mould people.
i liked it quite a bit, what's your next one? email me wingshinigami@gmail.com
i liked it quite a bit, what's your next one? email me wingshinigami@gmail.com
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January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was great! i really liked this! not that i didn't like the first but it seems to be a fuller and more complete story with both sides told. great job!
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January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Its fairly sad and coincidental that today is the first day I decided to read Invictus. Another author, Mephistedes, around the same time you wrote Bloody and I assume for the same prompt, wrote 'Out of the Night that Covers Me,' for the same poem. I hope you don't mind if I rec this. If you do, my email is callistianstar@gmail.com, and my lj is the same as this username.
Which is why I can say that really this story, along with Bloody but Unbowed really captures the inspiring nature and life of that poem. You executed both point of views really well. These last two scenes with Draco were delightful. I like the way you described Draco's own convincing to himself. Even more that he acknowledges how he was changed by Harry. I also loved the that you incorporated that one line (And Harry had somehow carried that mass of scar tissue within his soul and not bowed under it.) and that Draco took Harry's experience, even incorporating himself into that scenario with his childhood in Malfoy manor, and found himself speechless. Wonderful job with these two stories.
Which is why I can say that really this story, along with Bloody but Unbowed really captures the inspiring nature and life of that poem. You executed both point of views really well. These last two scenes with Draco were delightful. I like the way you described Draco's own convincing to himself. Even more that he acknowledges how he was changed by Harry. I also loved the that you incorporated that one line (And Harry had somehow carried that mass of scar tissue within his soul and not bowed under it.) and that Draco took Harry's experience, even incorporating himself into that scenario with his childhood in Malfoy manor, and found himself speechless. Wonderful job with these two stories.
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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Perfect!!! Chapter 32 please!!!
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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*drools* yummmmmmmmmmmy!