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Good chapter.
Keep going!

Craziness! I wonder if they'll ever hear of the extent of what Lucius had done. And what their reaction will be to the marriage. Harry's reaction too. Nice job. I look forward to the next chapter.

A great story, full of angst, fascinating, with unexpected twists. I look forward to the II part.

Sooo need chapter 15!!!

Oh gosh!!! Just discovered this and I'm in love with this story so far! I need to read more!!! If it's not too much trouble, can you please add me to your mailing list - phoenix_fire_cat@yahoo.com

I just ... wow. I don't know exactly what to say about this so far. I really love the story line, the plot, the idea. It's great! The only criticism I have for it is these two simple things - first there are a few typo's in some of the chapters, like forgetting to capitalize the 'h' in Harry, or putting him instead of he or just little things like that. The second thing is that I found from chapter to chapter things were a little jumpy. Within each chapter everything flowed fine, but then when I would go to the next chapter I would find things that did quite flow right, if you get what I mean? I know that's kind of vague, sorry. But an example of that is from when they've first had sex and then in the next chapter going to dinner there is some kind of plug in Harry ... maybe I personally missed that bit but I was really confused for a minute because I couldn't recall how it worked out that Draco had left something in him? I think the confusion might have come about because of the hermaphrodite properties of Harry's body with having two holes and all that.

Anyways, it was a very very enjoyable read otherwise and I want more ASAP lol. I can't wait for an update! This is unusual for me too because I haven't been into fanfiction much recently but this has re-awakened my love of it!
~gorgeousbowneyes

Whew. That was some chapter. Keep going!

I can't wait to find out how everybody is going to recive Draco, I mean, they will surely recive Harry with great happiness, but Draco? Hopefully they won't kill him on sight lol obviously they won't, unless you wanted to end this story so abruptly lol Anyway, I so need next chapter, that I

OMG, I can't wait for Harry to wake up and find out he's married to Draco, the shits definitely gonna hit the fan.

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Wow, very, very interesting story. Poor Draco is getting a handful with Harry... I was so happy when Draco killed that SOB! Though I think he should of torture him first... but oh well.

Please update chapter 14 soon ^_^

Jan

While I'm glad that Harry isn't unreceptive of Draco, it is a bit depressing that Harry just signed a marriage document shortly after being raped by his now deceased [and now father-in-law]. Although this will all definitely make it easier for Draco to gain immunity or something when he goes to beg Dumbledore. Nice job so far. I look forward to how that "begging" goes ove with the Order.