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by Seacilin

schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally!!! But well worth the wait! Great update!
person toads70
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please email me when you update this story , thanks!
person toads70
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loving this story, please update!
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MOREEEEE, what is going to happen now? I mean, Harry doesn't want to be claimed by Tom, but now he can't do nothing because of the thrall. And Tom lied to him, I mean he has to realize or remeber after they do it what Tom has done, and make Tom suffer very very much. And what about Tom? I don't really see that he like Harry, on in "that" way sooooo, I need that new chappie to figure this one out!!!
UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE, 'cause this 1st chappie was the bomb!!
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm... jesusfuckingchrist I didn't want to be a twat and use a pun but my brain is refusing to cooperate and give me another appropriate adjective... en'thrall'ed. There! I said it! I got it out of my system and I will never purposely pun you again. I swear. Great. Now I'm sitting in front of the computer in the middle of my family laughing like a loon for no apparent reason! Oh, well. I really am enjoying your story. It could do with a bit more of descriptive sections. I mean, I know more of how Magna looks like than Harry or even Voldemort! And that makes me sad. ;.; Anyways, I hope you up your descriptive parts in future chapters and that you can update again soon. Until then! :)
person Kirda
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOO!!!! You deserve a cookie!!! *hands you a cookie!!! (>^.^)>O *

Update soon please!!!


Kirda-Chan

person MissMiki
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh i'm so very excited about what will come next!! :D I feel so bad for Harry since he survives off of those comforting gestures and feelings.. Ack, can't wait till next time!! :)
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woww!~!!! I really thought that was a great begining. I can't wait to read more from you. Update soon.^^
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. There were a few places in it that I was not sure what exactly was going on because of the wording but aside from that I loved it. I think its very original and your characterization is great. I can't wait to read the next chapter. XD
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start, I look forward to more, keep it up!